We Interrupt This Program...

Wow - I'm impressed - great story.

As for which direction to go now.. I also say 1, 2, and 3 :-)

I was very interested in hearing how it had effected other parts of the country - and would also be interested in knowing how other parts of the planet had been effected. You even managed to bring it into my backyard - since I live 100 yards from the Tennessee river and would be in trouble if they brought the level of the river up more than about 20 feet.

There could be phone conversations with family members in other areas of the country - or even a brother who is in the Army and stationed overseas somewhere.

I don't really see that he'd have a problem with looters - he doesn't seem to be near a city. And the family doesn't have to fight amongst themselves since the "drama" is the Impact and how they deal with the aftereffects.
 

Green Co.

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ditto what Reader said...and Cooter? LOL, ain't nothing like being rudely blunt, but easily understood. (yeah, ditto to Cooters post , too)

And, with your permission, of course, I'll print this one out. Show my grandkids "I read Hagan before he was famous!"

Thanks

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Maiden

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:shkr: <------ Picture of me right now! Oh, I am greedy, too. This is GREAT! More, more, more please! I am on the edge of my seat. :eek:

I vote with DebMc .... I'd really love to hear more of the current crisis and then the aftermath.

Best e-book I've EVER read!!!

Alan ... you are AWESOME!
 

russ3

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I too am in awe of your talents, A.T. I also am interested, Like Reader, what might happen to the Gulf Coast, and how The areas of Northern Louisiana and Southern Arkansas might fare.
Just keep up the excellent work, everyone of us are on the edge waiting for the next installment.

russ3 :)
 

Doris

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I like #1, maybe a peek into the life of an only survivor in a particular area.
 
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dinosaur

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Meanwhile, in northern Georgia, a small RV was glowing with comforting light from a generator, while the rain continued incessantly, relentlessly, mercilessly...

A bearded man was hunched over a shortwave radio, his eyes on full scope alert, his ears as sharp as a fox, and his mind in high gear, thinking outloud.

"They report the deaths are so great that nobody can retrieve all the bodies. Some are floating away. The animal loss is higher, but the human loss is greater. This is so sad. I was warning people to get prepared, but I guess they had their priorities for fun and games, not preps. Now look what happened... the end of America as we know it."

"zog, I know you care, but we did all we could do," his companion replied comfortingly. "

zog sighed. "zoggette, you're a real source of strength in this crisis. I'm so glad we're together. This is the worst case scenario of the shit hitting the fan. The hamsters are reporting major deathkill on a scope beyond historical precedence. Our country has been forever changed. For worse? Or for better? zoobie warned about this, but I don't believe many listened."

"I'm so glad our neighbors prepped," zoggette said. Susan said their family was secure and warm with plenty of preps. Larry said he would do OK for now, but he was really worried about his mother down in Miami."

zog sighed again and said, "Well, maybe Larry can have a funeral for his mother, if they ever find her body. What washed out to see might never be found."

There was momentary silence and then the shortwave crackled again to life ***OH BAD NEWS MORE SO MANY LOST SO MANY DEAD PANIC IN THE CITIES OH MY GOD***________

"This sucks," zog growled. The government was totally unprepared for this and obviously didn't give a bug's butt about helping out the American people. Guess we're on our own from now on, sweetie. Tomorrow we face more problems, whatever they'll be, but we'll just pray and see."

Just then a small black kitten ambled over to zog and rubbed her nose gently against his nearest ankle.

"Hey, DoomSquirt, I see you're hungry." said zog with amusement. How about a taste of

:spam:
 

Maiden

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dinosaur, a very good "insert/aside/addition" to Alan's story. I enjoyed it much. Thank you. :)

PS. Did the kitty get to eat some spam? :)
 

rb.

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I can't believe I took so long to look at this thread!

A.T., I don't care what you write, just write it! I've paid so much money for books that have never been this well written, or this interesting.

Please keep writing. What a talent.
 

A.T.Hagan

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Just a note to let folks know I haven't forgotten the story - I'm in a time crunch between work and maybe having finally found a tractor I want for the homestead. Got some research to do for some upcoming posts. I know what I want to do, just have to learn where I can do it at.

Chainedlightning my friend, I'd suggest you move to higher ground. Consider the implications of getting more than a year's worth of rainfall in two weeks. Add in a major earthquake along the New Madrid fault.

Reader: Any story that involves possible tsunamis makes Houston a bad place to be but I'd have to look at some topo maps to get a feel for how bad.

Dinosaur: Nice piece with Zog. I considered working him into the story but felt self-conscious about using him that way without asking first. How's he doing? Haven't seen hide nor hair of him in quite a spell.

I'll try to get the next piece up this evening sometime.

.....Alan.
 
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Maiden

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Alan, thank you much for all the time, research and effort you are putting into this story. Yes, you have a meat life, too. I will be looking forward to your next installment when you get the time. :)
 

Green Co.

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Research for Alan

Re: Houston/Tx coastal plain, I'm 90 miles north of the gulf coast. Property in the area averages only +130' msl. FWIW.
 

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<b>August 15, 2002 - 6:00 a.m.</b>

The mantle clock was softly chiming the hour when Ann stepped through the door of Melinda's room into the living room shaking down a thermometer. John ran his fingers through his hair, "Well?", a tone of worry in his voice, "any change?"

"No, John", she replied, "the Tylenol hasn't changed it at all, she's running 103.4. She's curled up on her side in a fetal position with localized hardness and tenderness in her lower right abdomen. What are we going to do?"

He let out a long sigh. "Well honey, we've just come up against an important limitation on self-reliance. We've got to get Melinda to a doctor and we need to do it today - right now. Mike's patrol zone covers the west part of Gainesville I'll go over there right now, he shouldn't have left yet for work, and find out what it's going to be like trying to get to Shands. We haven't been a mile away from the house since Impact and from what we've been hearing on the radio I suspect it's getting pretty bad in town."

Giving his wife a kiss he stood up and headed for the back door. "I'll be back as soon as I talk to Mike and we'll take her in the van." A few seconds to don his slicker and he was gone, lost into the rain and darkness.

Four hundred yards down the road he came to Mike's gate. "HELLO THE HOUSE!", he shouted from the road. He'd known Mike for years but since Impact one did not simply walk up on to anyone's porch anymore without first announcing their presence, most especially not in the dark. Word had come last week that a neighbor of Miguel, the store owner, had been found dead in his living room, his house ransacked. Now passing through someone's gate uninvited was asking to come face to face with a shotgun - or worse.

A light sprang from the deeper darkness of the porch and played across his face and hands. "Morning John!", Mike called from the door, "What brings you callin' so early this morning?"

"Mike, I need to talk to you. Mel's bad sick and needs a doctor, maybe a surgeon. I want to take her into Shands but from what we've been hearing on the radio I suspect it's going to be a chore to get there. What can you tell me about the situation in town?"

"Are you sure she really needs a doctor?… No, I reckon you are or you wouldn't be here. OK, I tell you what. I go on shift at 0800. If you'll give me a lift to the hospital I'll have my partner meet me there. Since Impact we're all partnered to save fuel and… for other reasons and he's got my car. I'll be in uniform and will be able to get you through the check points faster than you'd get through otherwise."

John nodded and said, "Is it as bad as that then? I'd heard that the Guard had set up checkpoints but I thought they were just looking for looters and whatnot."

Mike studied his shoes for a moment and came back, "Yeah, it's bad alright. Might get worse too." He let out a sigh, "Probably ought to fill you in anyways. The way things are going it might come to… community involvement towards the end."

The darkness was gradually giving way to a deep gray through the heavy clouds. John said, "I'll go and get Melinda and Ann in the van and I'll pick you up here in a half-hour."

"Sounds like a plan then. Oh, and John? Wear a sidearm. Wear it openly and put a rifle in the back."

John turned and walked back towards his house, the rain stealing the sounds of his boots on the pavement.

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"Better turns toward Archer", Mike explained, "Payne's Prairie has come up so high that it's covered the part of the Williston road that curves around it. Covered 441 where it crosses the prairie too for that matter and is threatening to cross the Interstate as well. They've opened all the gates but it's coming in faster than they can let it out again. Looks like it's going to be Lake Alachua once more instead of Payne's Prairie for a long time to come."

"How bad is the water in town?" Ann asked, "I've heard that Hogtown Creek is out of its banks pretty far."

"Hogtown Creek, Sweetwater Branch, every little crick or branch in the county is trying to become the Suwanee river. Word off the net is that the Suwanee, Santa Fe and Itchnetucknee are miles into the woods and threatening to undermine a couple of bridges. No one living along those rivers now unless they're ten feet high or more on poles and even a lot of them washed away I hear. Lake Santa Fe and Newnan's Lake have risen twelve feet since Impact. Dad says they ought to look like he remembers then when he was a boy. Fishing down to Lochloosa and Orange Lake ought to be mighty fine in a year or so if ever this weather settles down. Course, we'll all have to paddle or sail from the landing with the fuel situation and all. Be hard put to even be able to drive by then."

This piqued John's interest. "Is the fuel situation that bad? Have they started rationing?"

"Oh yeah, they're rationing alright. That is when there is any gasoline at all there's a definite hierarchy of who gets it. Even the sheriff's department is having a hard time keeping our cruisers on the road and you can bet that running the a/c is right *out*. I'm sure you wouldn't be wasting your fuel storage like that but it wouldn't do to be seen driving around too much where folks could see you. Might arouse some unwanted curiosity. Word has it that come Spring folks like us with tractors and land will be entitled to special agricultural fuel if we use it in food production. It'll be like the 'off road' fuel that's not taxed now and has a special dye in it. Just don't get caught with it in your car because it'll be more than just a fine if you do."

The Horne's Aerostar came to the intersection with U.S. 27 and turned right, past Miguel's store now dark and with plywood nailed over the windows and doors. "Did something happen to Miguel?", Ann asked, "His store is all boarded up, he didn't get looted or anything did he?"

"No," Mike answered, "I saw him yesterday. He's fine. His boy Ricardo did put a .357 bullet past one fellow's head who wanted to get rough with Miguel when he wouldn't take his credit card but that was about as bad as it got. He's just got nothing to sell and doesn't want folks to damage the place looking for food or gas. Told me that he pumped every gallon of gas he had before the waves hit and sold everything in the store that could be eat or drunk by dark. Got a box full of cash now. I'm bettin' he'd rather have his gas and food back, leastwise his food anyways. He'd just have had his gas 'requisitioned' if he still had it. A can of pork and beans'll bring five dollars now - unofficially, of course - price controls won't allow for selling it for more than what it brought before Impact."

He grinned, "Course, there ain't no pork and beans and not much of anything else for that matter to be found for sale - officially that is. Nobody's starving…yet… but ain't no one getting fat in town either. Plenty of folks out here in the country ain't eatin' too well as far as that goes. We don't lack for feed corn to the house so we'll have pone at least right on but my boys would be pretty shy on protein if it weren't for them eggs y'all been giving us. Don't think I'll forget that."

Ann said, "Mike, we've been friends and neighbors ever since we moved out here five years ago. I can't recall how many times you or your boys have helped us. That's what neighbors are about - good neighbors anyways. Those hens keep right on laying - Impact or no - and we're certainly not selling eggs to coworkers anymore. Better to share them with the folks who are important to us. I'd say you're making it up in kind right now."

Conversation faded and they rode on in silence. Melinda moaned softly but her condition did not change. At Archer Rd and I-75 they came to the checkpoint. A dozen wet, dejected looking people sat under the overpass finding what shelter they could against the never ending precipitation under the watchful eye of a trooper who looked like a boy dressed up for Halloween. There was just one other car in front of them at 7:30 in the morning on one of the main roads into Gainesville. Another trooper walked up to the driver's window and bent over to see inside. "Good morning. Do you have business in Gainesville?"

Mike leaned over so the trooper could see him, "I'm Deputy Mike Daniels, ASO, These are my neighbor's John and Ann Horne and their daughter Melinda. They're giving me a ride to work and taking their child to Shands. She's seriously ill and looks to need a doctor bad."

The trooper, a corporal from the collar tabs, belonging to the local Gainesville company, gave a cursory examination to Mike's uniform, glanced through the car but scarcely noted the rifle in plain sight in the back. He took out a pad in an aluminum box and leaned inside the window to escape the rain. He wrote down the names of the vehicle occupants, their destination, license plate number and reason for being in town. He then gave a carbon copy of the form to John. "This is your pass to be in town Mr. Horne. You'll need to be able to produce it if you're stopped. We've had trouble with looting and stealing from the refugees so we're trying to limit their movements until things can be better organized." He glanced at Melinda, "I sure hope they can help your little girl. God speed to you."

The makeshift gate swung up and John drove through. The traffic lights were blank but as there were virtually no cars to be seen moving this wasn't a problem. John glanced at Mike and asked, "Is it like that at every road into town?"

Mike nodded, "Yes, it is. If I weren't with you and Melinda not so obviously sick you might have been a spell longer getting through - might not have gotten into town at all. I expect they'll be moving that checkpoint out to Tower Road before long, maybe even as far as Parker Road. They're not trying to restrict movement in the country but with the fuel situation being what it is and all no one's much driving out there anyways"

He gave a glance back towards the overpass, "I wanted you to see that before I said anything. Once you get Melinda seen by a doctor you and I have to talk."







<b>Alan's note:</b> If I've put the appendix on the wrong side will someone kindly tell me? It's been a *long* time since A&P and I haven't had the time to look it up again. Thanks.
 
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summerthyme

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Alan- I WAS wondering why a child would be having a gallbladder attack!!

Appendicitis starts with pain around the navel, and then localizes into the tenderness and "hard muscles" you described- in the *lower right* abdomen.

No harm, no foul. Great writing, keep it up please.

Summerthyme
 

A.T.Hagan

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Thanks!

Thanks Summerthyme, I've corrected my error. It's been a long time since A&P and I've forgotten more than I realized.

.....Alan.
 

luvfriedokra

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Alan, you're doing a wonderful job! I am completely hooked and loving every minute of it. Thank you, and please keep it coming whenever you can find the time.
 

Maiden

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Alan, I am on the edge of my seat wondering what they have to talk about. OH MY! Please do keep it coming. Awesome story!!! Thank you so much!
 

g3lemond

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Alan,

Great story!! I am with the rest please don't stop now....I've gotten my wife wanting to read more. You definitely have talent!
 

jay

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Alan, I'm really enjoying the story. You have a marvelous way with words and make everything so...visual.
 

A.T.Hagan

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In sickness and in health...

The Shands emergency room was crowded which did not surprise him as it was crowded every time he'd ever been here over the years. It was also rather dirty which did surprise him but considering the circumstances he supposed he should have expected it. Occasionally a moan would be heard, sometimes from Melinda, mostly from others. A low, constant mutter of conversation filled the room as well the audio of the TV's mounted in the ceiling corners of the room - all tuned to different channels. As patients came and went John gradually moved his family closer to the one tuned to CNN. They'd been sitting for four hours and he fully expected to be wating at least four hours more maybe much more. They'd seen the triage nurse in the first half hour of arriving - a tired, but efficient squad of them worked in the room's far corner - and he told them to be prepared for a lengthy wait. "Emergency services doesn't know how many refugees have made it into Gainesville since Impact but they do know that better than 50,000 have registered for services by now. Every hospital in town is inundated. If this rain doesn't let up soon it's going to get worse once we start having disease outbreaks. Your daughter's condition is serious but even that means a wait. Might as well make yourself comfortable."

John and Ann took turns holding Melinda and comforting her as best they could. She was conscious but not alert, her fever unabated. Ann left for the cafeteria in search of something for them to eat and John focused on the news.

<i>CNN Breaking News - Reports are coming in from Paducah, Kentucky of the failure and collapse of the Kentucky dam on the Tennessee river. There are no reports of casualties yet but they are expected to be minimal as the river has been sixteen feet and rising above flood stage for days so most residents in the danger zones had already been evacuated. The Kentucky Dam was the final dam in the Tennessee Valley Authority series of dams on that waterway and one of the largest both in terms of volume of water retained by the structure and the circumfrence of its shoreline. The dam itself measured over 8,400 feet long with a height of 206 ft. Emergency warnings have been sent to all communities downstream along the Tennessee, Ohio, and Mississippi rivers all of which were already in extreme flood stages. Ohio and Mississippi river bridges that had just been reopened two days ago are now being closed again until the crest of the new flood has passed and they can be re-examined for safety. Dam safety experts state the dam was probably weakened by the 6.1 earthquake on the New Madrid fault of two weeks ago and further stressed by the record breaking rainfall lashing the nation since Impact. Local weather authorities tell us that sixty three inches of rain have fallen here since the asteroid struck. The remaining TVA dams are being evacuated until they can be inspected for safety. Experts say that with all dams already at maximum emergency water release that other possibly quake weakened dams may fail as well. Further details as they come in.

Officials with the Army Corps of Engineers reiterated today that the Mississippi lock and dam system has been inspected and found to be holding even with all dams being in full emergency water release. It is not expected that the Kentucky dam collapse will cause dam failures on the Ohio or Mississippi rivers though the flood prone areas which have not already been evacuated are being cleared now as a precaution. Corp engineers do state they expect significant damage to levees and other flood control structures along the lower Mississippi perhaps as far north as Memphis. The record flooding along the river is severely hampering rescue and recovery efforts in the now sunken city of New Orleans devastated by the Impact tsunami"

The National Weather Service reports Hurricane Dolly has now reached Category Three with further strengthening expected before she makes landfall on the Texas coast. Latest projections are that she will strike the coast between Port Arthur and Galveston tomorrow morning at approximately 9:00 a.m. local time. Dolly is the third hurricane to have formed since Impact and weather experts predict more will form before the asteroid strike generated energy dissipates. Rescue and recovery personnel are being evacuated from the area along with surviving residents in flood prone locations.

This is CNN - more news after this.</i>

A commercial was next and John tuned it out. Presently Ann came back with two large styrofoam cups of steaming soup. "There's absolutely nothing in the vending machines, the Wendy's, Pizza Inn and frozen yogurt place in the food court area are all closed but the cafeteria is open. Not much there either but they did have hot soup and I got plenty of crackers to put in. Reckon it'll have to do until we can get home." Melinda moaned softly at the smell of the food but wouldn't take any of it. Pushing away the outside world Ann and John willed strength and life into their daughter.

After a time their inward concentration was distracted when they heard the name "Melinda Horne" over the sound system. John had held Melinda in his lap for over an hour and realized his left leg had gone to sleep as he tried to stand but he held his daughter tight and limped to the examination room with Ann. Unlike the waiting area outside this room was clean and well lit. Melinda moaned occasionally and drew more tightly within herself as they waited. Finally, an hour after being shown into the room a knock came at the door and a man entered. John's eyebrows rose as he said, "Well hello Luke! They have department chairs doing ER work now?"

The man in the white coat looked up from the chart he was reading and replied, "Hey John! Haven't seen you in a while!" He gave a rueful grin, "I'm afraid ever since Impact if you have 'M.D.' after your name you work when and where you're needed. My research schedule is just wrecked! When was the last time we went shooting? Been four, five months now." His face fell and he continued, "Looks like we won't be shooting for fun for a long time to come. I see Melinda is in a bad way today. Set her up here on the table and we'll have a look."

The doctor examined the child with some difficulty as Melinda resisted being uncurled from her fetal position. She cried out as he palpated her abdomen. "It's as I expected. Her white count is very high. Looks like acute appendicitis but it hasn't burst yet." He pulled out a pad from his pocket. "Ordinarily", he explained as he wrote, "I'd schedule her for the OR and be done with it but we're critically short of surgical supplies now. Anesthetics are so low the chair of Anesthesiology has a team in the library researching the use of ether - ether! - because we'll soon be out of anything better.

I think we may be able get this under control with a heavy antibiotic regimen. We're very short of those too but not as bad as some other consumables. We'll bag her and give her the initial course intravenously here and replenish her fluids, she's looking dehydrated. If she responds well I'll give you this prescription for a ten day course to follow up the IV with. If not we'll schedule her for the OR. I want to be straight with you, she's likely to have a chronic inflammation problem until it's removed but if we can forestall surgery for a couple of weeks or, better yet, months we should be in better condition when supplies are replenished. If she responds I'll want to see her again in three days. Do you have enough fuel to come back into town again? Still seems strange to say that but it's an important consideration now."

Remembering what Mike had said as they passed Miguel's store John replied, "Well, we don't have a lot but we'll use what we have. We can come back."

"Good. There'll be a pass waiting for you at the desk to come back into town. The authorities are restricting travel into and out of the city as I'm sure you've already found out. Frankly John, between you and I, some of what they're talking about makes me uncomfortable... but I'm needed here so we'll have to tough it out. I may not get to see you again if she responds to the antibiotics - I haven't worked like this since I was a resident! If I get a chance I'll bring Lisa out for a visit. She's always loved your country life. Good luck and we'll pray for Melinda."

He shook John's hand and gave Ann a hug and was gone. The door closed behind him and once again they were left with the bright white stillness of the examination room. Melinda moaned and curled herself tighter.
 

rb.

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Thanks, A.T. Anxiously awaiting the next installment. (This is harder than waiting for a book on inter-library loan! : )
 

Maiden

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Another great installment, Alan. I'm still waiting to see what John's police friend wanted to talk to him about as stated in your last part of the story. Still stitting on the edge of my seat. :eek: The CNN report was awesome and so well written. Oh, I did suspect appendicitis was what was going on with Melinda. This is so exciting! Can't wait for you to write again and, like I said, am still waiting to see what John's police friend had to talk to him about.

Thank you so much for continuing this terrific e-story! I look for it each time I sign on to the PC. THAN YOU, ALAN!
 

skinnycat6

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AAAAA what happens next?? lol

this is sooooo exciting, better than the news heehee..wonder if new hampshire is underwater yet..blub blub
keep up the great work, what a talented author you are !!!
(goes under for the 3rd time) ;)
 

AngieM2

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I'm anxiously awaiting MORE.... I think I'm going to copy story into a word doc so I can re-read at leisure.

Hope you are keeping copy so you can make a "real" book out of this,,,,, I think it would really sell.

AngieM2
 

A.T.Hagan

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Cowardly Lion said:
nice work, alan. glad i decided to come back around and see what tb2000 was doing lately.

has anyone in your story looked into hypnosis as anesthesia yet, a la alas babylon?

cowardly lion

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http://turnemout.freeservers.com . . political site

Well hey Lion! Long time no see! I'm sure if the shortage problem doesn't alleviate itself the docs at the College of Medicine and Shands will be trying all sorts of techniques new to them.

luvfriedokra, I *like* your handle! Always good to see a person of taste joining the board.

chainedlightning, I hope I haven't washed you away! From studying the map and the TVA dam information it the Kentucky Dam seemed the likely candidate for collapse with the earthquake and all.

I've got most of the next piece written already but I need to get out and clear out space in the workshop for the tractor that's being delivered Monday. Try to get it up tonight.

.....Alan.
 

chainedlightning, I hope I haven't washed you away! From studying the map and the TVA dam information it the Kentucky Dam seemed the likely candidate for collapse with the earthquake and all.

The Kentucky Dam is the last one and is several dams away from me.

Interestingly enough - I had a vision about.... oh... six or seven years ago - (and I've only had a handful of those) that the dam below the city of Chattanooga broke. That means all of the water ran through, leaving the dam above the city with hardly any water in FRONT of the dam - and that made that dam also go - which devastated the downtown area.

When we bought this house it wasn't quite as high as I'd have liked, but there is a hill between us and the water and I just "felt" that we'd be okay (and I generally trust my feelings). I still feel okay about it, though I know that if the water comes up a LOT that we could have problems - though theoretically it would have to go over the hill in front of us before coming back to us - and there is a lot lower ground behind us for it to go to before it comes back up to us. AND, I felt that having a water source nearby was important - we have the necessary filters and bleach to use to make the lakewater safe to drink if need be.

CL

Edited to add a PS - I live above both of he dams in the vision - no way would I be near the water if I were below either of those dams.
 

A.T.Hagan

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Home is where the heart is...

The rumpled looking nurse slipped the I.V. catheter out of Melinda's arm, and taped a small bandage over the injection site. The girl's color was improving. "We'll need to keep her under observation for another couple of hours," the nurse explained.

The sense of relief John and Ann felt was so strong it was almost palpable. Melinda was sleeping soundly so John left Ann to sit beside her on her gurney in the hallway crowded with other patients on gurneys and in chairs - there was no other place to put her - while he went downstairs to get them something else to eat. The hospital cafeteria was largely empty of people and nearly so of anything to eat as well. He supposed the patients at least would be fed but visitors and staff looked like had to largely fend for themselves. Another consequence of Impact and he suspected it would get worse before it got better. He did manage to come up with two peanut butter sandwiches, more of the soup they'd had earlier, and two cups of coffee. He had just returned upstairs when Luke came down the hall. He examined the girl and read the new chart notes. "Turns out I've got a few minutes before I need to be in the OR so I wanted to check in again on Mel." he explained. "She seems to be responding well, no reaction to the antibiotics and she's not in as much apparent pain. You should be able to take her home in a couple of hours if she continues like this."

He reached into his coat pocket and took out some folded pages. "I wouldn't do this for many but I know you and you're not prone to foolishness. Since you're out in the country and may be able to find some of this stuff I made up a list of veterinary antibiotics that are equivalent to those which can be used to treat Melinda's appendicitis. This is in case we run out of medical antibiotics. I've been working with one of the vet school faculty to put it together in case we have to resort to expedients. There's brand names, generic names, and dosage equivalents there. Until we can remove the appendix it's going to be prone to periodic inflammation. These should keep matters from getting out of hand." His pager went off and he removed it from his belt and read the display. "That's my OR call, I have to go. Good luck to you and we'll be praying for Melinda. The time may come that it will be good to have friends in the country. Good bye."

The doctor walked quickly off down the hallway and disappeared around another corner. John and Ann studied the printouts that Luke had left them as they ate their dinner.

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Darkness was beginning to fall as John carried his daughter out of the hospital to their car. He carefully stowed away the pass the trooper had given him earlier and the other one they'd need to come back into town they had picked up at the desk. They drove away from the hospital along Archer Road heading west and did not see but four other cars and two Humvees on the road with them for the three miles to the big shopping center just before reaching the Interstate. As he reached the area of the Albertson's grocery store they began to hear sirens. Looking in the rear view mirror he could see Gainesville P.D. and Alachua Sheriff's Office cruisers with several Humvees and a military truck rapidly approaching from behind. He was considering pulling over to let them by when he cleared the restaurants in front of the shopping center so that he could see the grocery store itself and the reason for the force moving in. A large crowd of several hundred or more people were rioting in front of the store attempting to pull down the plywood covering the windows and doors. A Humvee was burning in the parking lot. He could see two camouflage clad bodies lying on the ground and hear gunshots, some of the from automatic weapons. In a tense voice John told Ann, "Get the rifle out of the back seat and your pistol out of the glove box!" as he stomped the accelerator to race towards the Interstate overpass. As he reached it he slowed expecting to be stopped by the troopers at the roadblock but none were to be seen nor the Hummer that had been there earlier. He wondered if it were the one burning at the grocery store but he didn't wonder enough to stop. He kept a steady speed going through and passed under the bridge.

"If it weren't for the necessity of having Melinda seen again it would be a long time before we came back into town." John said as he breathed out a sigh of relief. "If matters are getting so bad that people are killing for food there's nothing in town that we need bad enough to come get it - except a doctor. You and Lisa were always tight, do you think you could convince her to try to talk Luke into coming out with us? That posh little neighborhood they live in is pretty close to the poor side of town. Might not take too much convincing I think."

Ann nodded her head, "I think it wouldn't take much either. With her and Heather there by themselves when Luke's at the hospital she's got to be scared about half to death now. You remember how reluctant she was when I taught her how to handle the little 20 gauge auto Luke bought her. I bet she's got it close by at all times now. When we come back in with Melinda I'll try to get over to their house and talk to her. Convincing Luke to come is going to be the hard part."

John considered for a moment and said, "I reckon so but much more of what we just saw he might just come. We'll know better in three days."

Passing through Archer they saw Miguel out working in his garden next to his house behind the store. They waved and he waved back. The rest of the trip home was completely uneventful. As they pulled up into the yard John could see his dad under the barn overhang skinning an animal. He waved as they got out of the car and went back to his task. After taking Melinda into the house and putting her to bed John went out to see what was up.

At first he thought the animal was a coyote - they were shy creatures but were occasionally seen around the homestead - then realized it was a German Shepherd. A Labrador pelt lay near by. "Dad, is that a dog? Why are you skinning it? Where's the baby?"

Robert replied, "Ed's wife, Gina, is watching the baby. I took him over there after the dogs showed up. Didn't want him trying to sleep out here while I was working. Saw these two and two more in the pasture chasing the chickens just before dark. They managed to kill one before I could get out with the shotgun so we'll be having chicken for supper tomorrow. I dropped these two right off from the barn, hit one more but didn't down him and the fourth got away clean. We've got more problems than dogs. While I was killing these two a boy jumped up from behind the mineral feeder in the pasture and hit the woods. Looked to be late teens, early twenties. Don't know who he is but I think I've seen him hanging around Miguel's. He startled me so bad when he jumped and ran that I missed the fourth dog. May have thought I was shooting at him from the way he leapt that fence at a run! Looks like we're going to need to keep someone in the barn at nights from now on. Reckon we can take it in rotation."

Nothing was said for a few moments as John paused to consider the implications of what his father had just related to him. "OK, but why are you skinning those dogs? "

"Why, for the pelts of course!", his father said in an exasperated tone. "Wally World isn't going to be opening anytime soon so we need to be thinking about where we're going to get our clothing from. I'll tan these two out with the fur on. Might come in handy this winter. Been reading your books and from what they say it's going to be a cold one. Come to think of it we'd best be putting away more firewood. We're going to be using a lot more than we ever have in the past if we have to use it to cook with regular and depend on it for house heat. We'll cook the carcasses and feed them. Between the dogs, the pigs and the chickens they'll clean them up and it'll save on the stored feed."

His son nodded his head in agreement. "I'll walk over to Ed's and pick up the baby while you're finishing the skinning. I need to talk to Mike anyways if he's home yet. I reckon you're right about the clothing but I'm going to let *you* explain to Melinda about her new Labrador coat!" Laughing he headed back out into the rain towards Ed's house.

He was wondering if he could convince Ann to sleep in the barn with him. He suspected he wouldn't be very happy with her answer.
 

Maiden

Membership Revoked
Yet another excellent installation, Alan. I still can't wait to see what Mike has to talk to John about. Thanks so much!
 

Woolly

Veteran Member
Excellent, A.T.!

You're keeping up the pace and the excitement, and may we say mystery (the teenage boy lurking in the area). Then there is still the empending conversation with the sheriffs deputy neighbor. I think I know what that's about, and there is going to be a significant moral dilemma for the characters and the reader, as well.

You spin a most interesting yarn, and you've been very realistic in the doing. As I read the part about the doctor explaining how short they were of drugs etc., and like an epiphany it struck me "Antibiotics will be trade goods of the highest order". However, such goods that will be available to the general public will be those put up for veternary purposes. You have subsequently covered that base in your story. Needless to say, I'm really getting into your story.

One problem: It is the dose translations between veternary supplies and human use. A technical issue, I know. All the same, if you have such information if would be useful for the entire board.

Thanks again for a great story. I look forward to the next episode.

Woolly
 
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