The Destroyer

Kritter

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Besides the high level donors whose invitation came with their pledges, Mallorie had invited people from a World War II veterans' organization and the monument's designer, in addition to Mr. Gant and the shipyard's owner. She'd hoped to make a fast speech of appreciation and show pictures of the monument's installation, but she felt obligated to welcome and chat with each person who entered the hall. But time was ticking away. She glanced at her mother, who stood in a corner swaying to the music, her purse still slung over her shoulder, and then at Jada, who sat alone, staring at her iPhone.

"Armando, where are you?" she growled under her breath, strolling back into the lobby and peeking out the front door. "I can't do this alone." She could hear the crowd inside growing more lively as the band started up In The Mood, and she could smell the sweet scent of lamb kebabs and orange chicken being readied for the buffet. Suddenly, a white stretch limousine pulled up in the Royal's circular driveway. "Oh god, oh no," she gasped, running towards the room and then circling back like a squirrel on a highway, not sure which way to turn. For a second, she thought to get Jada to run interference, but then she paused, squinting at the tall figure that emerged from the vehicle's back door.

"Armando!" she gasped in relief, racing out to him.

"Hi, sorry," he said, handing the driver a twenty dollar tip. "I couldn't get a cab to save my life and I didn't want to take the bus in a tux. How did you guys get here?"

"Jada's father loaned my mom his car," she said, pleasantly aware of the press of his hand against her back as he accompanied her inside.

"How's it going so far?" He rose his voice slightly to be heard over the music as he stopped at the ballroom's threshold.

"The guests are having fun, but Jada is bored and my mom looks like a wallflower."

Armando smiled, rubbing his hands together as his eyes danced over the bustling crowd. "I'll say hi to them in a minute, but...contacts first," he said, making his way towards the richest donors in the room.

Mallorie took a moment to survey the party, and then relaxed, feeling things were finally in order. She quietly sidled up beside her mother. "The buffet is out. Want something to eat?"

"Oh." Her mother smiled, surprised to see her, having been mesmerized by the band. "I already had a plate."

"You don't wanna mingle?" Mallorie questioned.

"I don't really know anyone here, but I'm fine, I know you're busy," her mother said, waving her off, sounding like she didn't want to be a bother. "You do whatever you need to do."

"Mallorie," Armando called her over.

"Sorry, Mom. One minute," she said, excusing herself to join him.

"This is Mr. Anderson," he said, gesturing to one of the donors. "He might be interested in having us do a T-shirt line to help promote solar energy."

"I'd love to do that," Mallorie smiled, and then frowned towards the man. "But, we'll have to get back to you on it...since my business partner is thinking of leaving the state."

"Your business partner," Armando said tensely, turning to her, "Is more than capable of running a virtual business from anyplace in the world."

"But the client...is here."

"And so...are you. I think we've got it covered."

Mallorie sighed, turning away in frustration, not sure she could handle more business by herself. She glanced at Jada, who was sitting alone at their table, watching people dance with her chin resting on her hands, and then she swung her head in the other direction as the guests broke into a murmur.

"Oh, god...it's Brooke," she gasped, grabbing Armando's arm. "She's a half hour early. Do something, please. You've gotta keep her full attention until I can get my mom out the door. And don't let her roam," she added, shoving him towards the young blonde.

"Hey," Valeria greeted her again as Mallorie popped up behind her. She tilted her head around her daughter, catching only a glimpse of a shadowy figure who had entered with a small child. "What's all the commotion over there?"

"Mom, come with me. I want you to meet someone," Mallorie said, grabbing her by the arm and scanning the room for a target. Then she dragged her hapless mother towards the bar. "Mom, this is Mr. Gant. Mr. Gant...my Mom."

"How do you do," he said politely. "You should be very proud of your daughter."

"Oh, I am," Valeria said, looking highly confused.

"Mom, Mr. Gant is the resident historian and supply manager at the shipyard.

"How nice," her mother said with disinterest, her head craning towards where she saw the small child.

"Mr. Gant," Mallorie said with desperation, "Did you watch The Walking Dead last night?"

"Uh, yes. Yes, I did." He nodded.

"What a coincidence," Mallorie said, shoving her mother closer. "So did my Mother."

"That's my favorite show," Valeria said, blushing.

"Mine too," Mr. Gant smiled. He started talking about how much he liked the latest episode and how he hated last season, and her mother chimed in with her own opinions, much in tune with his own. Their mutual dislike of one character in particular started them both laughing.

"Can I...buy you a drink?" he offered suddenly, nodding towards the bar.

"Oh," Valeria sounded surprised. "Well...sure."

Mallorie turned and bit her lip, glancing over her shoulder. Armando had introduced himself to Brooke and was engaging her in an animated discussion. Little Clara stared up at the ceiling, taking in the lights. And Jada had lifted her head and was watching Brooke with interest, having never actually seen her before. In one ear, she could hear Mr. Gant dissecting the show's current story line, and in the other, she could hear the band playing Moonlight Serenade, but her attention was almost completely focused on Armando. He had a genuine smile on his beautiful face as he bent to speak to Clara, and then he led her and Brooke to a dark corner table. Mallorie chewed on her lip. Brooke sat down and was leaning in closer, trying to hear what he was saying over the crowd's considerable noise.

"Would you like to dance?" Mr. Gant said behind her, followed by her mother's girlish giggle.

"I haven't danced in ages," Valeria responded, taking him up on his offer.

Several couples had taken to the floor at the sound of the popular song. The music was sweet and soothing. Mallorie leaned against the bar, watching Mr. Gant put his arm around her mother's waist, gliding her across the floor in a charming, slow dance, and for the first time she realized they actually made a cute pair. She hadn't given the man much consideration before than, since she only knew him from the shipyard, but he had an unassuming manner that she liked.

With her mother's attention elsewhere, Mallorie inched closer to Jada, finally taking a seat at her table.

"What are they saying?" she whispered to her friend, her eyes locked on Brooke and Armando.

"I have no idea," Jada said. "But it looks like your sister sure likes him."
 

Kritter

The one and only...
I really wanted to put up today and yesterday's episode at the same time so it continued in one uninterrupted scene, but it was just too big. But this chapter come up is one of my favs..and I can't wait to see the reaction. :P
 

kaijafon

Veteran Member
oh my!!! I can see SO MANY disasters that can happen right now!!!! a real chance at ANYONE to be "the destroyer. BUT I love how how Mallorie's mom is finding "love"..... at least I'm hoping and pulling for her!!!

thank you!
 

kittyluvr

Veteran Member
Kritter, you're leaving us hanging... Please, pretty please, would you kindly post the chapter you alluded to in your last post?
 

Kritter

The one and only...
For ten minutes, Mallorie sat in a state of stasis, watching Armando entertain Brooke while keeping an eye on John Gant and her mother - ready to jump up and run intercept should either stray towards the other. "Jada," she begged, not wanting to move, "Can you get me some food? I'm starving."

Jada laid her phone on the table with a grunt of annoyance. She stood, pulling down the hem on her tight grey dress, and walked towards the buffet with the inexperienced wobble of a first pair of high heels. Picking up a plate, she plundered the remains of the buffet, and then paused a moment to eavesdrop on a conversation. "Mr. Gant is offering to show your mother his boat," she giggled upon returning to the table. She laid the plate in front of them both and handed Mallorie a fork. "So, when are you gonna introduce me?" Her chin lifted towards Brooke.

Mallorie frowned. "Not now. I can't. I can't go near her while my mother is here." She speared a large slice of chicken and stuffed the whole thing in her mouth, followed by several fast scoops of rice. "I should be talking with the guests. I feel so guilty."

"People know what to do at a party. You don't have to worry. Everyone's having a great time," Jada tried to reassure her.

Mallorie grinned at her in appreciation, before crossing her arms and leaning back in her chair, her eyes narrowed at Brooke. The girl was leaning in on her elbows, completely enamored with Armando, and he was clearly flirting with her. "Really?" she growled under her breath, staring at the two of them with growing resentment. Suddenly, she cursed and ducked her head as Clara spotted her out.

"Mallorie!" the child enthused, racing towards her with a shout of excitement.

"Hey Clara," she whispered, turning her chair away from the view of the dance floor and giving the young girl a hug. "Are you having fun?"

"I wanna dance!" Clara glanced past her to where a few people were doing the jitterbug. "My dress spins. Do you know Armando?" She pointed back at him.

"Yes," Mallorie said dryly, her head lifting at the sound of Brooke's laughter. She and Armando had moved knee to knee, and Brooke was making a strumming motion. "Oh god, she's talking about her guitar lessons now," she said to Jada, her mouth taking a further downturn. "She better not be hitting on my boyfriend."

Jada nudged her, nodding towards her mother, who was putting on her coat.

"Do me a favor," Mallorie said quickly. "Watch Clara for me for one minute?"

"I guess," Jada sighed, taking hold of the child's hand.

Mallorie casually rose from her seat, giving fast smiles of acknowledgement and words of greeting to each guest she passed on her way to catch her mother near the door. "Oh, are you leaving?" Mallorie questioned innocently.

"Yes, Mr. Gant has offered to show me his boat," her mother said, gesturing out the window. "You don't mind if I head out, do you?"

"No, not at all," Mallorie said, "You two have fun."

"I'll make sure she gets home in one piece," Mr. Gant winked, putting his arm around her shoulder. Valeria grinned, glancing back at her daughter with an adorable mugging face, suggesting she thought the man had potential.

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Aware that the hour was growing late, her speech was rushed and brief. Skipping the photos of the installation, Mallorie cut straight to the point. "Thank you again to the donors, to my amazing partner, Armando, for his steady reassurance, and to my Mom for supporting me. And a special thanks to the person who made this possible to start with..." Her eyes rose up across the tables before returning to the corner. "Brooke Durham, whose incredible donation put us over the top!"

Brooke stood and smiled, beaming at the crowd and their hardy round of applauds. She sat again just as quickly, turning back towards Armando, who placed a hand on her wrist. Mallorie pursed her lips, abandoning the mic to walk over to their table.

"Having fun?" she sniped at them both, her arms crossing once again.

Armando lifted his head and stood. "I assume your mother is gone."

"Yeah, she's gone," Mallorie said,

"Good," he said coldly, glaring at her. "I'm gonna go salvage what's left of my night." He paused before leaving to smile at Brooke. "Not that it wasn't a pleasure."

"He adorable. He looks just like Rafa," Brooke said the second he'd walked out of earshot.

"He's still my boyfriend," Mallorie said stiffly.

Brooke rose, the shimmering fabric on her cocktail dress falling perfectly into place. "He...was flirting with me...not the other way around," she said, putting her hands on her hips. "You think my father doesn't have a list of like...five guys I'm allowed to date? And believe me, he's not one of them," she laughed, taking a hold of Mallorie's arm and leaning in close to her ear. "Not that it wasn't a pleasure," she said, mocking Armando's accent.

Mallorie sighed, and then joined her in laughter, shaking her head at herself.

"So who are all these people?" Brooke said, her eyes drifting with interest over the dwindling crowd. "Introduce me?"

"Come on." Mallorie smiled, taking her by the hand, feeling even closer to her sister than before. They made their way around the floor, chatting with the donors and the artist, grinning the entire time. Brooke was perfectly enjoyable company, and everything seemed to be working out. They even managed to wrangle some partners and dance a couple of times. And even as the last few party goers made their way towards the door, the girls were still giggling together in the hallway, hiding from the last few drunken patrons.

"This was a blast," Brooke said, putting on her coat, her purse held between her knees.

"Because of you," Mallorie said, sincerely.

Suddenly, Jada appeared in the hallway with Clara in tow, stopping just short of them both. "Excuse me," she clamored angrily, directing her words at Brooke. "Excuse me, she's not rich." She thrust a finger towards Mallorie. "She's poor, and she lives in Harlem, and her mother just works in that hotel."

Mallorie gasped at her in disbelief. "Jada, what are you doing?"

"Who's this?" Brooke tilted her head, her brow knotted in confusion.

"I'm her best friend...except when you're in town," she said with clenched teeth, shoving poor Clara back towards them. "Then, apparently, I'm just the babysitter."

"Oh, god." Mallorie started shaking her head. "I didn't mean to forget you. I swear. Everything just got so crazy."

"You could have asked for my help. Oh, wait...that's right..." she seethed, her voice full of retribution. "My help means nothing to you. Let's all stand and give thanks to Brooke for her huge contribution."

Mallorie closed her eyes. "The speech," she said, realizing what was fueling Jada's anger. "I forgot to thank you and I absolutely should have..." she tried, trying to defuse the situation. "I'm so sorry."

"Is that true?" Brooke said behind her. "What she just said? You don't live in New Hampshire?"

Mallorie winced and turned around, biting her lip. "Sort of," she answered.

"You lied to me?" Brooke's eyes darted between the two of them, searching for the truth, the troubled look of hurt and confusion evident on her face.

"Oh, that's right. One more thing," Jada said, still raging at them both.

"Jada, please stop," Mallorie begged under her breath.

"She's your sister," Jada said. "Your father...is her father. And her mother has the proof."

Mallorie shook her head at Jada and then swallowed, turning back towards Brooke. "I wanted to tell you," she started.

"You lied," Brooke interrupted, the impact of those words only just sinking in.

"I'm sorry...but it was the only way I knew how to get to know you. I mean, you're my sister," she said, taking a step towards Brooke, searching her eyes for some emotion.

"No...I'm not." Brooke shook her head.

"Yes, you are. We're sisters...for real," Mallorie said, trying to offer a smile.

"No, we're not," Brooke said, backing away, her voice growing weak and stressed.

"Well, you don't have to acknowledge it if you don't want," Mallorie said, mildly annoyed. "But the fact still remains. We have the same father. We share the same blood."

Brooke backed up another step, her head continually shaking. "No, we don't," she said again, her body starting to tremble uncontrollably. "Mallorie...I was adopted. I know it wasn't highly publicized or anything, but I sort of thought everyone knew."

Mallorie staggered, clutching her hand to her chest. "But...I thought you were," she gasped, her heart and mind spinning at the news. The blow was unexpected and hard, and it crushed her deep inside. "We're not sisters?" she said with grave disappointment, her eyes welling up with tears.

"No," Brooke said calmly. "We're not. We're nothing." She finished putting on her coat in haste and grabbed Clara's hand. "Don't talk to me anymore."

"Brooke...Brooke wait," Mallorie tried, watching them disappear down the hallway, and then she turned her head and slid down the wall as Jada disappear in the other direction.
 
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kaijafon

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OH WOW! NOW THAT WAS something! Mallorie WAS being "bad" in that she ignored Jada, and "forgot" her.... but I did NOT see Brooke being adopted coming! AWESOME chapter!!!

Mallorie's life IS destroyed but maybe not as bad as she thinks....?
 

stjwelding

Veteran Member
Amazing!!!!!!! Kritter you have just outdone yourself with this chapter Mallorie's house of cards gust came crashing down. And what will her fathers reaction be when Brook confronts him, and her mother finds out about all that has transpired. Waiting for more!!!!!!!!!!!
Wayne
 

freshPotatoes

Contributing Member
Great chapter !!! Wow...now she's lost Jada's friendship and Brookes... hope she still has her boyfriend after this...

Can't wait for moar !!
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Tablecloths were removed and chairs re-stacked inside the Royal's ballroom. The glittering star-like strands, which had lent so much atmosphere to the evening, disappeared in the lines of harsh fluorescent light. Stripped of its colorful facade, the room was exposed for what it really was. A small, empty space with white walls and a scuffed up floor that had seen the feet of far too many weddings. The risers were lowered. Band members packed up; the sound of their equipment being clasped in cases mixing with the muffled din of their voices.

Mallorie's eyes drifted across the room before falling on her purse, which sat alone on a table. Numb to everything, she walked over and picked it up, not quite remembering how she got there or how she'd meant to get home.

The facility's owner greeted her from the kitchen, his arms stretched out in businesslike cordiality. "How did the evening work out for you?" he asked.

Mallorie took a deep breath, her eyes clamping shut, willing him away. She was emotionally and physically drained and - had the building been empty - the floor would have made a perfectly good bed. "It was fine," she said softly, not turning her gaze from the emptiness before her. "But it was the worst night of my life."

"I'm very sorry," the man said solemnly, understanding she spoke of something personal. "Would you like me to call you a cab?"

"Please," Mallorie whispered.

"Don't bother," Armando's voice rose from behind them. "I'll take her home."

Mallorie turned and stared at him as he approached her from the lobby. He looked like a roman column in his tux - standing tall and straight with square, broad shoulders. He tucked his hands casually in his pants pockets and nodded towards the door. "You ready?"

"You waited for me?" she said, trying to keep her emotions together.

"Of course." He put his arm out, not straight - but curved, as if offering his shelter. She took a single step in his direction and then raced forward, wrapping her arms around him. A great, pained sob heaved from her chest,

"What's wrong?" he asked with an irritated sigh, an attitude she found oddly affirming. The past eight months had been a roller-coaster ride of new and traumatic emotions, and he was probably sick of the drama, but this was on an entirely different scale. She couldn't even begin to describe her shock, confusion, embarrassment and deep sense of loss, and there were no words to convey how alone and lost she felt in that moment.

"Come on," he said, guiding her towards the waiting limousine, his arm secure on her shoulder, a gesture that would have been soothing if not for the knowledge he still meant to move to California. She climbed inside and reached for him the second he rejoined her.

"I'm falling apart," she sobbed, completely distraught.

"Okay, deep breaths," he said, trying to calm her. "Just explain to me what happened."

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The limousine navigated through the darkened grid of streets, its tinted windows saving their eyes from the assault of city lights. Mallorie drifted in and out of sleep, her head resting against Armando's chest. His reaction had been different than she expected, his first concern being whether or not Brooke would mention the encounter to her father, and whether or not Matthew's job offer to him would still stand. But she understood. He was incredibly good at business because that would always be his main focus, and she would never be more than a close second, not that close second didn't work in his case.

"Okay, here's what you do," he said, calculating the best chance for a positive outcome. "Wait a few days, then send a text to Brooke re-explaining your position. Do whatever you have to to tug at her heartstrings, but don't mention your father again. She might be having jealousy issues, knowing you're his natural born daughter."

"Okay." Mallorie tilted her head up, having not considered that point. She was Matthew's only real child. That had to hold a certain fascination for him. She laid her head back against Armando's shirt, absorbing the warmth of his body. "I wish you would stay with me," she said honestly, feeling incapable of handling life without him.

"I can't. I can't pass up a once in a lifetime opportunity," he said firmly. "Not like this. But...if you wanted to come with me..." He leaned back and reached a hand up to lift her chin, needing to see her eyes. "Not right now, I know you have to finish school. But when you're done. It would give me enough time to get established and get us a place."

"Live with you...in California?" she said, the dark fog that clouded her mind dissipating slightly.

"Would you like that?" he asked, smiling at her brightened eyes.

"Hell yes," she answered, the horror of the evening quickly swept beneath a carpet of palm trees and sunshine.

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Pink and purple balloons and a huge bouquet of roses filled the doorway of Valeria's apartment. Somewhere behind them, a delivery man stood, waiting on a signature from the recipient.

"I think it's for you," Valeria teased, glancing back at her daughter, who jumped from the couch to take them from the man.

"Birthday?" the man asked her.

"Mm hmm." Mallorie beamed, hunting through the flowers for the card. "From Armando," she said, clasping the tiny envelope to her heart, before laying it down to find a vase.

"John wants to take us out to dinner," her mother said, tying the balloons to the back of a chair. "Where ever you wanna go."

"Can we go out on his boat?" she asked, having loved their last two outings speeding around the bay. The boat was 32' of awesome with a cabin and a kitchen and a bed.

"It's too cold for that today," her mother said, tilting her head as the doorbell rang again. She opened the door with a look of surprise. "More flowers? Who's this one from," she smirked, passing the small vase of pink roses and baby's breath to her daughter. "A secret admirer?"

Mallorie opened the card and then bit her lip, grinning as she tucked it in her pocket. "Just a friend," she said, stealing the vase away to her room to sit it on her dresser. She flopped down on her bed and opened her computer, bringing up the sample Real Estate Licensing questions, going over them one more time. "Hope I don't disappoint you," she whispered, glancing at the card, before scheduling a date to take the test.
 
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stjwelding

Veteran Member
Thanks Kritter great story. The last chapter leaves a lot of questions unanswered hoping for answers soon. Great story!!!!!!
Wayne
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Thanks Kritter great story. The last chapter leaves a lot of questions unanswered hoping for answers soon. Great story!!!!!!
Wayne

Yeah, the last scene of the last chapter is a jump ahead, and the first scene of the next chapter fills in part of the space between...(Mal debating continuing the license course, texting Brooke etc...) You'll see... :P
 

lassiesma

Senior Member
I can't imagine why the need for a real estate license except to prove that she is willing to work hard. I certainly hope it isn't a trick of some kind.
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Two rows of plastic tables with folding chairs made up the interior of the test room. Mallorie entered early and took a seat in the back, pulling her notes out of her bag to review them one more time. She was the youngest person by far amongst the diverse crowd, and it made her feel self-conscious. She took a deep breath to calm herself. It had been over a month since she'd made the decision to continue the course, despite Armando's tempting invitation to join him. The choice came out of her fear that if anything didn't work out, she would kick herself for not completing it, but now graduation was three months away, and she found herself more interested in the internship than in moving. She turned her head as the test administrator walked in, her eyes following him to the front of the room. He pulled a stack of papers from his brief case.

"Good afternoon," he said, his eyes lifting with impatience as a disheveled young man raced into the room and slid into the seat next to Mallorie.

"Hey," the young man whispered, running his fingers through a handful of unruly blond curls, looking like he'd just fallen out of bed.

"Hello," she responded politely, narrowing her eyes at his badly wrinkled shirt.

"My alarm didn't go off," he said in explanation, digging through his book bag for a pencil. "Did I miss anything?"

Mallorie shook her head. Tucking her notes back in her purse, her eyes fell on the small card that had come with her mystery flowers. There was no name signed or words of greeting. The card said only "100%," but she knew right away it was meant as a challenge from her father.

"Good luck," the boy said as the administrator passed out the exam, which contained over a hundred multiple choice questions. The room grew silent, save for the sound of pencils filling in circles or being drummed against the table in thought. Mallorie blew through the math questions first, then returned to tackle the terms and ethics, her mind drifting in thought while she worked. She had texted Brooke so many times after the night at the launch party, trying to make her understand the unique position she'd been in, pouring her heart into every word, but Brooke refused to respond. And then there was Jada, whose ice-like glare in every class dared her to start a fight.

Mallorie sighed, her fingers rubbing together as she came upon a question she didn't know. "100%," she whispered to herself. It wasn't just enough to pass the test, her father wanted her to ace it. She tried to remember when she'd reviewed that particular question but nothing came to mind. Biting her lip in frustration, her eyes flicking nervously towards the clock. It was the last question on her test, and she hated to leave it unanswered. To add to her annoyance, the boy beside her, who had already finished his, started tapping his hand loudly against his desk. Glancing at him sideways, her eyes narrowed at the way he held out just three fingers. Her eyes darted back to her paper. Hastily picking 'C,' she turned it over as the clock ticked down its final minute.

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The streets were busy, the sidewalks teeming with suited people heading back to work after lunch. Mallorie wove through a maze of street vendors, newspaper stands and hot dog carts, heading for the bus, her hand clutching tight to her purse.

"'C' was the right answer." The boy from the test strolled up behind her as she waited on line at the bus stop.

"Oh, hi," she said. "Yeah, thanks...but I didn't need to cheat."

"Did you take the online course?" he questioned, pulling a crumpled up jacket from his bag. He slipped it on and shook out the sleeves, trying to remove the wrinkles.

"Yeah," she answered curtly.

"Ah, I thought so. We all took the same night class. Well, everyone in that room but you. We're all gonna head over to Sparks," he said, pointing to the bar down the street. "If you wanna join us."

"No, that's okay," she said, turning her head, her eyes searching for the bus.

The boy stared at her with a curious gaze, as if trying to figure her out. "My mother owns a real estate business in the village. I'm gonna work for her. You?"

"Oh, I just needed mine for an internship."

"An internship at a real estate business?" he questioned, sounding confused.

"Um, no, at...um...D.V.C?"

The young man raised his eyebrows. "That's an awfully big door to have a foot in. You know someone there?"

"Sort of," she said, folding her purse to her chest.

"Yeah, they'll probably have you showing units for them at the Infinity Tower."

Mallorie cocked her head. "What's that?"

"Are you serious?" he laughed, crossing his arms, unsure if she was joking. "It's the multi-purpose building they're opening downtown. It's gonna have some of the most expensive condos in the city. That...giant mirrored building?"

"Haven't seen it," she admitted, taking a step forward as the bus came into sight.

"Are you sure you don't wanna join us?" he asked, gesturing towards the bar one more time. "Never hurts to have contacts in real estate."

She bit her lip and glanced down the street towards the crowded little pub.

"I'll buy you a burger," the young man teasingly tempted.

Mallorie sucked in a breath and let it out, sighing at the boy.

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Ear-splitting dance music poured from Sparks Bar and Grill through its open door. Boisterous voices and laughter rose over the sound of clinking glasses, and some kind of hockey game commentary from the multiple televisions added to the deafening noise. Mallorie tightened her shoulders and walked sideways, following the young man as he cut a path through a wall of Friday revelers. She recognized her fellow test-takers at a table in the back, their wide smiles and outstretched hands welcoming the young man to join their fold.

"What's your name?" he shouted to her, locating empty chairs for them both.

"Mallorie," she answered, taking a seat, wishing she hadn't come. It was too loud for any real conversation and too crowded to hope for service.

"Everyone, this is Mallorie," he announced. "She took the online course." He started to introduce her to a dozen strange faces whose names she made no effort to remember. "And I'm Bradley," he finally bothered to mention. "But don't call me that. Everyone calls me 'Doug.'"

"What? Why?" she asked, confused.

"Because my last name is Douglas." He laughed, leaning back as a waitress passed and grabbing a hold of her arm. "We need some burgers and fries and a couple of drinks," he said, handing her three $100 bills.

Mallorie raised an eyebrow at him and then glanced down at her purse, hearing Armando's ring tone. She reached for her phone and then hesitated, glancing at her surroundings, deciding it would be better to wait and call him back later.
 
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Kritter

The one and only...
Photographs of colorful sunsets silhouetted by palm trees covered Mallorie's wall - pictures Armando had taken outside his new apartment. Between work and school, he hadn't had much time to do anything social, so he was waiting on her arrival with adorable impatience. She bit her lip at his latest letter, which included a countdown calendar, and then turned her eyes to the envelope behind it, which contained her real estate license. She strayed from her thoughts as her phone started to ring with a tone she hadn't heard in ages.

"Jada?" she answered tepidly.

"I saw the monument," Jada said.

"And?"

"That's her face, isn't it...on the foundry woman on the statue. Eddie's wife's face."

"Oh, yeah." Mallorie grinned, having forgotten all about it. "I gave her picture to the artist to copy."

There was a pause as Jada chewed on her response. "That was nice of you," she finally said. "He deserved the recognition."

"Mmhm," Mallorie mumbled, uninterested in any apology that might have been forthcoming, nor did she feel inclined to offer one. Too much time had passed, and too much damage had been done, and she honestly didn't care to renew their friendship. High school would be over soon, and whatever ties and mutual interests they'd had in the past were gone.

"I got accepted to Pratt," Jada mentioned. "For fashion design."

"That's cool. I'm going to NYU."

Jada gave her typical snort. "Enjoy your free scholarship," she sniped sarcastically.

"Okay, bye," Mallorie said, hitting the button to end the call, unwilling to entertain her jealousy. She glanced at her reflection in the mirror beside her desk and shook her head, not at how the call ended, but at her immediate and natural response. She was going to NYU. It was the answer that came from her heart. She glanced down at Armando's letter and pouted, rubbing at her temples. It wasn't so much 'out of sight, out of mind,' because she still wished that they could be together, but now that she'd made contact with her father, she really wanted the chance to get to know him, and she couldn't do that any other way than to take the internship that summer.

She picked up her phone, sucked in her lips, and gathered her courage to call him, pacing her floor as it rang.

"Hey," Armando answered warmly. "You'll never guess what I just got for us?"

"What?" She swallowed, already hating herself for her decision.

"One of my neighbors here was moving, and he had a ocean kayak he wasn't taking, so...now it's hanging in our garage."

Mallorie pouted, second-guessing herself. It sounded like an ideal life, to go to college with her own apartment, supported by her working boyfriend, while they continued growing businesses together. But she instinctively knew she wasn't ready to move, a thought driven home by the fact that she'd never even mentioned the idea to her mother.

"Mallorie?" he questioned her silence.

"I think I'm gonna take the internship," she said softly, closing her eyes as if she could shield herself from his reaction. There was a long stretch of silence on the other end. The kind of silence that had a lifetime of living and dying stuck somewhere inside it. She started to speak when he didn't respond. "I really need to get to know my father. It's the only..."

"I understand," he interrupted. "And...after that?"

"I...guess I'd like to try NYU," she said weakly, blinking back tears at his heartbreaking sigh, knowing how deeply he'd bought into the idea of her coming after he'd made his offer.

"Okay...well..." he gave his clipped response, clearly lost from the news. "I'm gonna go. I've got a class to catch. Keep in touch I guess." Then there was only the sound of a dead line - the perfect sound to accompany what had just transpired in her mind.

"I'm so sorry," she said, both to him and to herself, wishing circumstances were different. If only Jada's outburst hadn't put her in such a vulnerable position none of this would have happened. But deep inside, she knew it wasn't Jada who was at fault. It was Matthew Durham, who knew damned well they were a couple when he offered her boyfriend the job. She flopped onto her bed with conflicted feelings, missing the pinks and purples of her old comforter and curtains, wishing she still had her stuffed animals next to her pillows. She swallowed, hearing the door to the apartment open and shut, wanting to run to her mother. But her mother could never know about most of the things that were troubling her. It could only multiply her problems if she did.

"Hey," Valeria peeked in her room from the hallway. "John's coming over for dinner. I think I'll make the..." She stopped mid-sentence, observing her daughter's tears. "What's wrong?" she asked with concern, walking to the foot of her bed.

Mallorie wiped her eyes with the sides of her hand, feeling all of five years old. "Me and Armando just broke up."

"Awe," her mother soothed, shaking her head. "I had a feeling that would happen when he moved that far away. Long distance relationships are rough."

"Yeah," Mallorie pouted, trying to pull herself together. "I'll be okay though."

"Well, when you feel up to it, join me in the kitchen. I'll make your favorite chicken."

"Okay." Mallorie smiled, then bit her lip as her mother glanced down at her desk, first at the calendar Armando had sent, and then at letter beside it.

"What's this?" she questioned, picking it up, narrowing her eyes at the license.
 

kittyluvr

Veteran Member
Thanks Kritter, I'm pretty sure Mallorie's mom is going to put 2 and 2 together with the real estate license and the small business venture contest...
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Green Plexiglas walls and a silver desk made up the outer office of Douglas Real Estate. The place looked expensive, which probably explained why the receptionist was ignoring Mallorie, who hadn't thought to dress for the excursion. Nervously rubbing her hands against the sides of her jeans, she approached the aloof woman with a grimace of discomfort. "Hi, I was looking for Doug?"

"If you mean Bradley Douglas," the woman sniffed, "He's taking a cigarette break out back." She flicked her hand towards an exit sign that appeared to lead to the courtyard.

"Thank you." Mallorie approached the large metal door, which looked straight out of a prison. She opened it slowly and peered outside, her eyes widening at an amazing garden, trimmed with low walls of brick and stone and filled with plants and flowers pots. There were bird baths and little statues of whimsical frogs and strings of crystals and beads hanging from tree limbs, completely surrounded on all four sides by the towering metal building. Bradley sat on a ornate bench wearing a nice white suit, in sharp contrast to the wrinkled mess she'd seen him in the last time they met.

He stood up when he saw her and cocked his head, taking a slow, contemplative drag from his cigarette, pointing a finger at her. "Mallorie...right?"

"Yeah," she smiled apprehensively, taking another step into the courtyard, still holding on to the door, afraid it would lock if she closed it.

"What's up?" He retook his seat, confused by her appearance.

"I need to ask you a really big favor," she said, quickly sizing him up. He looked like a teen in adult's clothes, and she imagined she probably looked that way herself when she wore business outfits. His unruly blond locks were now tamer, but still bordered on the windblown side of 'surfer boy.' Bradley leaned back on the bench, spreading his arms behind it, regarding her with a dubious expression.

"How do you feel about lying?" she asked, displaying a roguish grin.

"It depends on to who...about what," he answered, watching her as she finally let go of the door and took a few steps closer.

"My mother doesn't know where my internship is...and she can't...for personal reasons. But she found my license and when she questioned me on it...I said I got an internship...working here...for you."

"Why would you do that?" he asked, narrowing his eyes.

"Well, you were the only person I've ever met in real estate and I didn't know what else to say," she whined. "I'm not good at lying when I'm put on the spot."

Bradley chuckled, shaking his head, finding her story amusing. He leaned forward and set his elbows on his knees, clasping his hands together, the cigarette still clutched between his fingers. "So what do you want from me?"

Mallorie's shoulders wilted. "That's kind of the screwed-up part. This guy that she's seeing is thinking of moving to Manhattan, and so now....they want me to show him apartments."

Bradley sat up straight and started laughing. "That's funny as hell."

"Funny to you maybe," she growled. "But I don't know what to do." She caught her herself giving him an attitude and tried to reign in her emotions. Sweetening her voice, she played the damsel-in-distress. "Do you think you could you help me...please?"

The boy leaned back on the bench again and took another drag of his cigarette, pondering her request through a haze of smoke. "And what do I get in return?"

An irritated sigh blew Mallorie's lip, afraid he was going to ask for something lurid. "What do you want?"

"Get me in the door with you at D.V.C," he said.

Mallorie started shaking her head. "I can't. I only know one person there and only just barely..." she paused, watching him narrow his eyes. "I'm serious, Bradley..."

"It's Doug," he corrected.

"I am not dealing with two names," she seethed.

The boy glared at her with a huff of his own, and then stared up at the sky in thought. "Alright. If you can't get me through the door...just introduce me to the person you know. Over lunch or something."

Mallorie slapped a palm to her face. "I can't," she said, starting to laugh at the absurdity of the situation.

Bradley stood, cocking his head at her unusual reaction. He took a step closer and lowered his voice. "Is this some kind of undercover shit?" he questioned.

"No," Mallorie said, nearly doubling over, unable to stop her laughter. "I'm sorry. It's just... really, really complicated."

Bradley dropped his cigarette to the ground and crushed it with his foot, leaving a darkened smear on the quaint cobblestone path. "Alright, I'll show the apartments and I get the commission, and you can trail along with your mouth shut like a good little student. But as soon as you start making headway at that place, I want in."

Mallorie shook her head at his brashness, but her back was against the wall. "I promise I'll do what I can."

The boy walked to the door and opened it. "Oh, and you also have to buy me lunch...at Mark Joseph's, right now," he said, glancing at his watch.

"Are you serious?" Mallorie hissed, boggling at his nerve. "A baked potato is $10.00 there."

"Mm, that sounds good. Should go really well with a T-bone," he grinned, stretching his hand out, politely inviting her to precede him.

---

Mallorie sat in the darkest corner of the steakhouse, painfully aware that she was under-dressed, although the sweater she was wearing was at least a tasteful shade of lavender. She stared at the menu, calculating in her head how much her lie was going to cost her - guessing if Bradley's T-bone comment wasn't made in jest, she was out at least three hundred bucks. The amount wouldn't have bothered her the month before, but between Armando being busy with his move and her classes and the online course, their Chariot sales that month had lagged.

"Maybe I should order some wine too," he said, looking over the menu.

"Are you old enough?" she questioned.

He peeked out at her from the side of the menu. "No. Good point."

She shook her head with annoyance, aware that he was teasing, but not finding it nearly as funny as he did.

"So let me guess," he said with a pretentious air. "This the first time you've ever been to a fine dining establishment."

Mallorie rolled her eyes at him, then twisted her head, sure she heard her name being called.

"Mallorie!" the voice called again, quickly attaching itself to the woman she knew as Louisa St. Claire. "I haven't seen you in ages," the woman said, strolling up to her table. "Where have you been? How are you?"

"I'm good, how are you?" Mallorie smiled with genuine affection. She glanced across the table at Bradley, who sat like a piece of rock with his mouth hanging open.

"You know, Clara keeps asking about you. I'll have to get your number. What on earth are you wearing?" Louisa said, suddenly frowning at Mallorie's attire, before glancing over her shoulder. "Excuse me one minute, honey." She backed towards the bar. "Let me just say goodbye to my friends and I'll come and join you for a while."

"That's...Louisa St. Claire," Bradley whispered the second she left the table. "You know Louisa St. Claire? Louisa...'My family owns half of Manhattan'...St. Claire?"

"Mmhm," Mallorie answered demurely.
 
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moldy

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I'm thinking perhaps that pride is the destroyer.... mallorie's pride, jada's pride, matthew durham's pride....

Interesting. Gotta say, I used to like Mallorie - now she just keeps making bad decision after bad decision IMHO.

Moar, please?
 

DustMusher

Deceased
I'm thinking perhaps that pride is the destroyer.... mallorie's pride, jada's pride, matthew durham's pride....

Interesting. Gotta say, I used to like Mallorie - now she just keeps making bad decision after bad decision IMHO.

Moar, please?

The thing to remember is that Mallorie is what between 16 and 18 years old, just a high school senior who, though is very book smart and learning some business acumen, still is a baby when it comes to really significant interpersonal relationships.

I had forgotten how much learning is needed to be people smart until I moved here on the ranch and had a new 'family' with kids 28 to 15 years old. All of them are still learning about people smarts.

I am hoping Mallorie learns before she has blown up too many bridges or laid too many mine fields.

Good character development, Kritter. They all seem too real.

DM
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Heat from the vent above Mallorie's head baked her in her sweater, although she dared not strip down to the Justin Bieber T-shirt she was wearing while sitting in the posh mid-town restaurant. Instead, she rolled up her sleeves and tugged uncomfortably at her collar as Louisa took a seat beside her.

"When...was the last time you spoke to Brooke?" Mallorie questioned, unsure of what she knew.

"Oh, not since she went back to Jersey. I rarely get to see her as is," Louisa answered, turning her irritated gaze on Bradley. "Who are you?"

"Bradley Douglas. Douglas Realty." He extended a hand like a salesman.

Louisa's eyebrow rose as she shook his hand with indifference, her attention redirected back towards Mallorie. "Are you thinking of moving?"

"No, he's just a...family friend," she answered, feeling incredibly awkward. Louisa knew nothing of her falling out with Brooke, but to further her lies now felt dishonest. The problem was that Bradley was there, so she couldn't come right out and say it.

"I see," Louisa said, losing all interest in the man. She leaned forward on the table and rested her chin on her fist. "So, let me get you all caught up."

Mallorie's stomach braided with impatience while she listened to Louisa. Not wanting to impolitely eat while talking, she attempted to ignore the mouthwatering smell of her steak while secretly hoping the woman would keep her visit short. Her wish went unheeded though, as Louisa went on at length about her enjoyment of Clara and how she'd taken over all of Brooke's 'big sister' duties with the child.

"You should see how she looks in Nicole Miller," Louisa said. "I took her shopping at Nordstrom's the other day and she went crazy for everything in there."

Mallorie chuckled, imagining Clara wearing designer clothes. "You know you're gonna spoil her."

"So what?" Louisa flicked back her wrist with a scandalous grin. "I never had a child of my own to spoil, and really...it's so much fun. Her father is letting me take her out to the Hamptons over the weekend. I can't wait to show her off to all my friends."

"Show her off to your friends?" Mallorie said. "It sounds like you're talking about an object." She glanced at Bradley, whose eyes darted between the two, trying to follow their conversation while he slowly popped piece of a roll into his mouth like he was eating popcorn during a movie.

"Don't be silly," Louisa scoffed, tapping the arm of a passing waiter and ordering a glass of wine. "So, how's your little business coming along?"

"It's fine, it's a bit slow right now but..."

"You don't still have that dreadful picture of me up, do you?" Louisa interrupted, slowly standing, her gaze wandering over to a female friend who had waved to her from the bar.

"No, well, yes, but I'll...take it down," Mallorie said, noting Louisa's attention was now fully on the other woman.

"I have to go, dear, a good friend of mine is here," she said, excusing herself from their table. "I'll send Clara your regards."

"That's probably her date," Bradley said under his breath, watching Louisa walk away. "How...how exactly do you know her again?"

Mallorie grabbed her fork and knife in relief and started sawing at her steak. "She's a friend of a friend."

"And...when you and her say 'Brooke,'" he continued. "Are you talking about Brooke Durham?"

"How does everyone know who everyone is?" Mallorie seethed, cramming a big piece of meat in her mouth and continuing to talk despite it. "I never even heard of half these people myself before last summer."

Bradley leaned back in his seat, observing her from a distance. "And somehow, I believe you. You know what you are?" he said, leveling a finger at her. "You're an enigma."

"Just eat," she glowered, ignoring all further questions he attempted to lob in her direction. Bad enough that Jada and Armando knew about her Durham connections - the last thing she needed was some stranger figuring it out.

"So when does your mother's friend want to look at these apartments?"

"I'll call them and ask," she sighed, having forgotten she still had to lie through that too.

---

From the balcony on the seventeenth floor of a tall, mirrored building, Valeria stared across the Hudson River at the gray Manhattan skyline. "I'm not sure I understand this." She turned to Mallorie, who leaned against the sliding glass door behind her. "John said he wanted a place in the city. So why are we in Jersey?"

Mallorie gave a lopsided shrug, glancing over her shoulder at the two men who spoke inside. During the car ride there, Bradley seemed to question ever facet of Mr. Gant's existence, asking him about his job and his life, and then, ignoring the man's request to see cheap one bedroom apartments in lower Manhattan, they'd somehow ended up in the Holland tunnel instead. Now they sat waterside in a large two bedroom condo in a building so new it still smelled of fresh paint and carpet.

"You're twenty minutes to work that way..." Bradley was saying, nodding his head towards the east, "and twenty minutes from Harlem. With the equity in your boat, you can make the down payment and you'll only be paying half of what you would have been paying over there." He gestured towards Manhattan. "But you're gonna own the place. Plus you can keep your car and your boat," he said, pointing to the parking garage and marina. "And the best part, John, is this..." he said, walking to the window. "Every day, you've got this beautiful view of ships rolling through the harbor. Look at them," he whispered, as if they were the most beautiful things on earth.

John Gant's eyes lit on the kaleidoscope of boats that trailed straight wakes of white foam along the Hudson, and then he peered over at Valeria and smiled.

"I don't know," Valeria said. "It seems like such a big commitment."

"Oh, I almost forgot to mention," Bradley said, leaning over the balcony and pointing a few blocks north. "There's an enormous shopping mall right over there. Almost within walking distance."

Valeria craned her neck, following his finger. "A real mall?" she asked in a dreamy voice.

"Three...stories...tall," Bradley said, raising his hand upwards as if to invoke its grand scale. "With an eleven screen cinema and a nineteen restaurant food court."

Valeria turned her head back towards John and pouted. "A real mall."

"I'll take it," John Gant said in response, nodding his head towards the papers.

---

"You are so incredibly good at this." Mallorie laughed, lingering inside the young man's car after they dropped off her mother. "I'm so impressed!"

Bradley lifted his chin. "It's a gift," he said with cocky smirk. "But really, I learned a lot from my parents. There's a reason my mom is one of the best agents in the city."

"Well, now I hope my mother moves in with him." Mallorie closed her eyes, imagining air conditioning in summer and seeing the river from her bedroom window. "I so wanna go to that mall." She reached in her pocket as her cell phone rang and glanced at the incoming number, swallowing hard at the letters, D.V.C. "Thank you so much for everything," she gasped, hopping out of the car. She waved a fast goodbye to the confused young man and then quickly answered the call.
 

seraphima

Veteran Member
This is a fascinating story, and I have trouble waiting in between chapters. However, that is probably good for me. Thanks so much!
 
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