The Destroyer

Kritter

The one and only...
A mellow folk song played from the tiny speakers attached to Mallorie’s iPod. She’d never heard of the band before, but Brooke had ‘liked’ them on Facebook, and she was curious to see if they liked the same music. Grabbing a notebook, she sank to the floor, leaning her back against her bed, her toes pressed against the radiator. She opened to an empty page and stared at it for half a minute, tapping her pen against her lower lip. “Public domain.” She jotted it down, before glancing up at the blue sky outside her window. Her eyes drifted to the clock. Jada wanted to get together to make plans for the beach, but she had so much to do. She needed to write a business plan, pick out the photos she wanted, think of a few more catch phrases and maybe sketch some designs. However, it was nearing noon, and Brooke had posted something about meeting some friends for lunch, and she was dying to see who they were and where they were going.

She put down the notebook and then picked it back up, grunting with frustration. Entering the contest was a must if she was ever going to get a chance to talk to Matthew Durham. “My father,” she corrected her thoughts, although it still felt funny to say it.

She put the notebook down again and pulled herself to her feet, walking over to check her email. Earlier in the day, she had written a private message to Armando Martinez over Facebook, introducing herself and asking him what he thought of her idea. Now she felt silly for having done so. He was in college studying music, and his business was an iPhone app that allowed people to track street musicians. He probably thought she was crazy, writing to him about girls' fashion. She stood, preparing to go back to work, and then she paused, biting her lip. The deadline was still half a year away, and she had no idea how long Brooke was staying in the city. Plus, it was summer vacation, and she was supposed to be having fun. Mallorie smirked at that final sentiment. Grabbing her purse, she raced out the door, scrambling to catch the downtown bus.

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Public benches dotted the sidewalk that skirted the wall around Central Park. Mallorie sat in the corner of one, hoping to appear invisible among the throngs of innumerable strangers. She tugged down the hem of her short, blue dress, knowing her mother would kill her if she ever saw her wearing it out. Her eyes remained glued on the entrance way to the Wellington Hotel, watching for any signs of Brooke or her friends. After twenty minutes, she stood and paced closer, concerned she might have missed them somehow. “Or are you eating inside?” she questioned, trotting across the street, impatiently edging closer to the emerald canopy that sat over the front door.

A second later, Brooke emerged from the door in the company of three other teens. She was wearing a plain white T-shirt and shorts, looking cool and breezy with a lavender scarf and belt. Mallorie quickly spun on her heels as they started down Central Park West behind her. She could just make out their conversation whenever their voices rose. It was talk about which college had the best swim team coach and what they were planning to eat at Safia’s. Mallorie was familiar with the restaurant’s name. It was a ridiculously expensive sushi place a few blocks away. She made a turn when she reached the corner, assuming they would do the same.

Leaving the grand concrete towers near Central Park behind, the street grew more quaint. She strolled past the beautiful four-story brownstones, passing in and out of the shade of a dozen leafy, green trees. Mallorie slowed her steps a little, wanting to catch more of what the girls were saying. Brooke, she noted, spoke the least and the softest - the opposite of what she expected. She was no queen bee, nor even very outgoing, if her current conversation was any indication. They talked about a mutual friend who was thinking of getting married and about a party they were planning on attending, but the majority of their discussion was confusing and seemed to center on horses. She spent a moment thinking that the girls were kind of shallow, before realizing most of her conversations with Jada centered around boy bands, boys and TV shows. The restaurant came into sight and Mallorie crossed the street, having heard enough to satisfy her curiosity.

Riding home on the bus was pleasant, as its air conditioner was going at full blast. She picked up the newspaper on the seat beside her and started browsing through it, finding amusement in the comics, but her eyes were drawn to an ad for DVC. They were looking for college students to be summer interns, and it set off a thought in her head. Even if her father had no interest in her, he might still be able to help her in her career. Although, that would require speaking with him, a scary thought she couldn’t imagine accomplishing.
 
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kaijafon

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I really like this story. I'm left wondering just who or what is the "Destroyer" that it is named for. Is Mallorie going to "destroy" her fathers life? her own? or is the actual ship going to play a major part..... ???

I really love how all your stories are so different. :)

thank you!
 

Kritter

The one and only...
*grin* I was wondering when people would start wondering that.. :P I'll just say this. The title..was very carefully chosen. ;)
 

freshPotatoes

Contributing Member
Just got back from holiday and discovered your new story... Thanks so much...loving it... I can't wait to read what happens next !!
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Surrounded by posters of boys and bands, Jada laid back on Mallorie’s bed and stared up at her broken ceiling fan, remembering a time in their youth when it actually worked. “This is boring,” she complained, leaning back up on one elbow.

Mallorie gave her an apologetic glance. “Sorry, but I really wanna figure this out.”

“Well, you know how much she makes each week, right?” Jada sat up and swung her legs over the side of the bed, scanning over the bills Mallorie had spread across the floor.

“Yeah, about $650 take home with tips.”

“And the rent here is what?”

“$2200.”

“Which leaves $400 plus $1000, then minus food, electric, cable, phone,” she started counting off on her fingers. “Bus passes, clothes, laundry, health insurance...”

Mallorie waved off the rest of her comment. “Alright, alright, I get it. It just feels like I should be getting more than $20 a week.”

Jada shrugged. “We’ve got enough to get to Coney Island.”

Mallorie gathered the bills together. “That’s not really the point.” She walked into her mother’s room and carefully placed them back in her desk drawer. “I’m the daughter of a millionaire. I should be getting like a $1,000 a week.”

Jada laughed at her wishful thinking. “Go find yourself a lawyer. So are we gonna make plans for the beach or not?” She trailed Mallorie back into her room.

“Yeah, I just have to get this business thing done.” Mallorie swung her hand at the notebook on her dresser, feeling bad that she hadn’t even started.

“Oh, by the way...I got a letter back,” Jada mentioned, reaching into her back pocket. “From that place in San Diego.”

“Really?” Mallorie said with disinterest, picking up Jada’s purse from her bed and pulling out her iPhone.

“They still had the old inventory records of what they removed from the destroyers, but there wasn’t any trumpet listed.”

“I told you he was crazy,” she said, checking up on Brooke’s twitter feed.

Jada craned her head to view the screen and then sighed and crossed her arms. “Why are you so obsessed with that girl?”

“I’m not,” Mallorie growled, blithely tossing the phone back towards Jada’s purse.

“How many times last week did you follow her?” Jada asked, taking a skeptical stance.

“Once or twice.”

“No,” Jada corrected. “You were over there on Sunday, Monday, Wednesday and Friday.”

“So what?” Mallorie snapped. “I just wanna see what we have in common. You know how sometimes kids are separated at birth, but they still have all the same interests?”

“That’s twins,” Jada said, looking her up and down. “And you ain’t no twin.”

“You’re just jealous,” Mallorie said, immediately regretting having said it.

Jada did an expected double-take at her. “Jealous of what?”

Mallorie picked up her pocketbook and grabbed Jada by the arm. “Let’s go find that old man and show him your letter.”

Jada sighed, relinquishing her anger for the moment. “I feel bad for him. You think he’ll be upset?”

“He’ll be surprised to hear we won the war.” Mallorie smirked as they walked out the door. “

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Walking down Lenox Avenue brought a kaleidoscope of aromas. First they were hit with the smell of donuts and coffee, then dry cleaning fluid and hairspray. The next block had fried chicken followed by the acrylic smell of the nail salon. The tobacco place smelled like pipe smoke, and then it was the fries from the McDonalds on the corner. The food in particular made Mallorie hungry, just adding to the frustration of her empty pockets.

“I hate being poor,” she complained, strolling past an empty lot beside a boarded-up building.

Jada glanced at her sideways. “You need to be thankful for what you got.”

“What have I got? Oh...that’s right. Nothing,” Mallorie snarled, feeling more irritated by the heat than normal.

“You got Freedom, a home, a family...”

“What family?” Mallorie quickly countered.

“Your mom?” Jada said with annoyance.

Mallorie rolled her eyes. “Yeah, but I don’t have any grandparents, no brothers or sisters, no cousins...you’re lucky you have a big family.”

Jada rolled her eyes in turn. “You’re crazy. Just sayin.’”

They turned the corner of the senior center, expecting to see the usual line of elderly out on their chairs, but there were very few people outside.

“Where’s the trumpet man?” Jada asked the first woman they came upon.

“Ed? Do you mean Eddie?” she asked, pointing towards the inner foyer. “They got the air conditioner fixed so he’s sitting inside.” She started walking towards the door and then turned towards the girls, waiting for them to follow.

“Should we go in?” Jada whispered.

“I heard ‘air conditioning,’” Mallorie whispered back. It felt weird as hell walking into the place, but the promise of a break from the heat was a strong motivator.

A world of gray greeted them inside the facility doors. Light gray carpet, dark gray upholstery, greenish-gray curtains, bluish-gray walls. The girls stood together, shoulders touching, practically ready to cling to each other as they were met with a lobby full of curious old eyes.

“Over here.” The woman waved them over to where the trumpet man was working on a puzzle. “Ed. Ed. Eddie!” she repeated, trying to get his attention. “These ladies are here to see you.”

“Yes?” He gazed up at them, looking befuddled.

“I, um, I wrote to the place that dismantled your ship. You know, about your trumpet?” Jada started, pulling the letter from her pocket.

“Oh?” His eyes brightened with interest.

“Yeah, but unfortunately, they didn’t have it. I don’t think you left it on that ship.”

“Ah.” He tilted his head to read the letter in her hand, his eyes growing watery with emotion. “I must have left it in the basement.” He nodded, putting his shakey hand over hers. “In the Normandy. Behind the boiler.”

Jada gave his hand a kindly pat and then turned to the old folks who had gathered around them. “I...guess he means another ship.”

“No, I don't think so,” one of the old ladies there interjected. “I think he's talking about his old building. The Normandy. Over on Riverside.”
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Rising over the Hudson River, the ornate twin towers atop the Normandy Apartments made it look like a double lighthouse, and surrounding the gardens of its glass enclosed courtyard were luxurious, million dollar condos. The girls both craned their necks towards it as they walked the last block up 87th Street. Sweat slicked their arms and stung their eyes; the brutal weekend temperatures soaring well into the 90s.

Jada tugged at the front of her spaghetti-strap shirt, trying to air herself out. “I’m dying,” she said, reaching up to lift her thick curls from the back of her neck.

Mallorie ran her tongue across her lips, wishing she’d brought along some water. “I could jump in that river right now.”

“Me too. I hope this is worth it.”

“Why would he put a trumpet behind a boiler?” Mallorie questioned, thinking back on the old man’s words.

Jada gave a weak shrug. “Beats me, but it better be down there.”

They approached the building’s gilded doors, which opened to tease them with a breath of cool air as the doorman stood over its threshold.

“Ladies?” he questioned.

“Hey,” Jada stammered, looking a little flustered. “There’s this guy at the senior center who used to live here, and he says he left his trumpet down in the basement. Eddie is his name?”

The doorman gave a smarmy grin, shaking his head like he thought the girls a pair of thieves with a poorly contrived story. “Either he needs to call us or have someone from his family come ask about it.”

Jada’s lips puffed into a pout, her shoulders wilting in disappointment. She glanced at her friend, looking for a plan, but Mallorie was just as clueless. “Okay, thank you,” Jada said politely, biting her lip in frustration.

“Sorry,” Mallorie attempted to consol her. “But so, let’s just tell the guy to have his family call.”

“I guess.” Jada’s head hung down as they slowly started the long walk back to the bus. “But it would have been so cool if I could have found it.”

“Wasn’t meant to be,” Mallorie mused, using the line her mother used on her when things didn’t go her way. They strolled quietly for a while, too hot to even speak. The last half mile, each step felt like it came with the addition of fifty pound weights.

“Hey, you wanna go to the pool at the park?” Jada asked suddenly.

Mallorie considered her proposal for a moment. They hadn’t been to the pool in ages because everyone said the little kids peed in the water and the thought had been off-putting, but now that they were older and taller, they could probably just hang out in the deep end. It was an entirely too tempting thought in the heat. “Yeah...okay.”

Jada broke into a smile, her poor mood instantly washed away with the prospect of some fun. “Run home and get your bathing suit and meet me over at my place, and don’t forget towels,” she said, sounded more excited by the second as they hopped onto the bus.

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The day grew more tolerable with the promise of a dip in cold water. Mallorie opened her bottom drawer and picked through her old bathing suits, tossing them haphazardly over her head before settling on a dark green bikini. She dug a beach bag out of the closet and stuffed it with a few towels, and then took a second to bend over the computer to check Brooke’s feed and her email. Her eyes widened at the unexpected response from the handsome Armando Martinez. She lowered herself to the chair and opened it, her eyes scanning over several paragraphs of thoughts. He’d written a very comprehensive list of things she needed to do and consider, including links to internet sites that would help her with each step. It ended with a note that he had accepted her friend request on Facebook, in case she had any further questions.

Mallorie glanced at the clock and stood, knowing Jada was waiting, and then sat again as Facebook’s tinkling sound informed her of an instant message.

‘Hey,’ Armando wrote. ‘Did you get my email?’

‘Yeah, thanks,’ she quickly typed back. She ran to find her flip-flops and returned to the screen, hunching over to read his respond.

‘Your business idea is good and all, but if you seriously want to win that competition, there are things you can do to make it more appealing to the judges.’

‘Like what?’ she asked, sitting again.

‘I learned a lot last year, lol. I’m over at the Starbucks by the Apollo, if you wanna come hang out. I can tell you what they’re really looking for.’

‘Right now?’

‘Yeah.’

Mallorie stared at the blinking prompt, conscious of its ticking seconds. Even though he was technically a stranger, it was a perfectly safe invitation. The street was busy, the store well attended, and it was just a few blocks from her home. ‘Give me fifteen minutes,’ she typed, reaching for the phone.

“Jada,” she gasped, rambling to her friend as she raced to her bedroom to put on a dress. “That guy Armando wrote me back. He wants to get together for coffee.”

“You don’t drink coffee,” Jada said dryly.

“It’s Armando. Who cares?” She flew into the bathroom to scrub her face, shoving a handful of cosmetics into her bag. “I’m gonna go meet him at Starbucks. We can do the pool thing tomorrow, okay?”

There was a long pause followed by an audible sigh. “Want me to come with you?”

Mallorie hesitated, biting her lip. “Nah, it’s just gonna be business.”
 
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Kritter

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Mallorie wrinkled her nose at the pungent smell of brewing coffee. Her mother never drank it, and so she’d never had much exposure to the aroma outside of passing coffee shops. She associated it not with mornings and breakfast, but with a culture of young adults. A culture she wasn’t a part of, and yet here she was in Starbucks, standing among its members, feeling out-of-place and self-conscious.

Her eyes scanned over the crowded room, taking in the muted tan decor, the whimsical paintings of coffee cups on the wall and a spate of potted ferns. She identified Armando from his online photo, already well-acquainted with his sculpted jaw and the deep, sexy cleft beneath his nostrils. Despite the heat, he was wearing long pants and a nice dress shirt, rolled up at the sleeves, looking every bit the young businessman that he aspired to be. Mallorie felt oddly childish in his presence, in part because of his nice appearance and in part because of his age, knowing he was almost 20. She sucked in her breath as his soulful brown eyes fell on her with a look of inquisition.

“Mallorie?” he asked.

“Yes,” she answered, aware that she was already blushing. She clutched her notebook tighter to her chest and walked up to his table.

“Have a seat.” He gestured towards the opposing chair. “Are you okay?” he asked, noticing her trembling hands.

“Yes, I’m sorry.” She slid into the chair and laid her purse on the floor before awkwardly picking it back up and holding it in her lap. “I just...I wasn’t expecting you to even respond.”

Armando tilted his head. “Because I was in the competition?”

“Because you almost won it,” she said, relaxing a little, taking her bag and hanging it over the back of her chair. A second later she rethought that location, reaching over her arm to grab its strap, moving it onto the table, but it looked like a barrier there. She wrapped her arms around it and pulled it closer, then realized that made her look apprehensive. Finally, she pushed it against the wall, and bit her lip with exasperation.

Armando smiled warmly. “I like your sketches,” he said, charging straight into the topic, turning his laptop so she could see the pictures. “This design in particular has a really cool...edgy feel. But you’ve got a problem.” He grinned as her face dropped. “No, I don’t want you to get discouraged. Just listen.” He touched her hand briefly, as if to be reassuring. “It’s just, there’s nothing here that differentiates you from a hundred other T-shirt start-ups, and unless you turn over a million dollars, they probably won’t give you a second look.”

Mallorie frowned. “So what can I do?”

Armando put his finger up as if to list a point. “Find a way to tie your product to a cause...or to raise social awareness somehow. The committee loves that stuff. For instance,” he said, going back to her sketches. “Maybe add a line or two on the back of the shirt, listing some facts about woman who worked during the war, and...” He stuck up his finger again, marking a second point, “have a portion of your proceeds go to some women veterans’ fund or a project to preserve these pictures. Anything in that nature.”

“That’s such a great idea.” Mallorie opened her notebook and jotted it down.

Armando stood, maintaining his hand on the back of his chair. “I’m gonna grab another coffee. Do you want anything?” He nodded towards the counter.

“Iced tea, maybe?”

“Sweetened?”

“Please,” she said, watching him walk over to stand on line. He was more adult than she’d expected, but she found herself liking that he was serious about business, and that he took her inquisition seriously. It meant he hadn’t come there looking to hit on a teenaged girl, even though her ego might have liked that. She chided herself for having seen him as a ‘potential boyfriend,’ until she remembered it was Jada who had put him in that silly girlish light.

Armando returned to the table with his refill and her tea. “I got you the large one. I hope that’s okay.”

“Thanks.” She smiled demurely, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear, trying to look and act as professional as he was.

“So, have you done anything besides the sketches?” he asked.

“Well, I’ve looked at a few T-shirt distributors and silk screeners. I’m pretty sure I want to go with high quality cotton and at least three color inks.”

“So they won’t be cheap. Have you done the math?”

“Yeah.” She flipped through her notebook and turned it, showing him her base calculations.

“Good.” He nodded approvingly. “What kind of capitol do you have to start?”

“Five thousand dollars,” she said, biting her lip, instinctively knowing it wasn’t enough.

Armando frowned. “You’re gonna need to do a kickstarter. You’ll need to make a professional video for it. Use some of that money to order about twenty of the shirts, get a good videographer and a model to do a fashion shoot. And...if you could get a shirt or two into the hands of someone who’s well-known...”

Mallorie raised an eyebrow at his statement, while she finished writing down his suggestions. “I...might be able to do that. I know someone I can ask.” It was probably impossible, but worth trying. She examined the page full of notes she’d taken, feeling overwhelmed, and then glanced back at the experienced and competent Armando. “I don’t suppose you could help me with some of this?”

The young man leaned back in his chair and smirked, glancing around the room like he expected everyone there to find the absurdity in her question. He shook his head with a low chuckle. “Not for free. But if you’re looking for a partner...”

“And if I am?” she questioned.

“You’d need to sign a contract. Then I’d match your five thousand dollars and we’d go in 50/50. But you’d need to be 100% committed. You’ll need to get yourself a business wardrobe and be ready to spend every waking moment on this project.”

Mallorie drew in a long, slow breath, carefully weighing her options. “Would you be committed too?” she asked.

“100%,” he answered.
 
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kaijafon

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I'm so rooting for her!! I love this idea and wish it was for "real". I hope you don't mind but I'd like to toss this around when I get a permanent job teaching for the high school girls. NOT in the scope you are talking about but I'm wanting to do a "women in science" for high school girls chapter and this would be a great idea for female scientists! for the group to order and/or sell for fund raisers.

great story! I'm so pulling for a happy happy ending!! lol! I would love it if she tricked her half sister into modeling those t shirts!!! hahaha! that would be so great!
 

momengineer

Senior Member
Kritter, I am loving this story! But cautiously, since I was hurt at the ending of Little Fox. (Not *disappointed, as it was great writing...just just hurt- which shows I really got into the characters...I hope that makes sense- its actually a compliment!) I keep waiting for the big plot twist...I mean, Armando could be "the destroyer"!!
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Haha...I love it. While The Destroyer definitely has its share of twists...you can safely like Armando. He is one of my ultra rare 'good guys.' :)
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Pancakes were a morning treat whenever Valeria Ortiz had the day off. She stood barefoot in front of the stove, wearing a floral sundress, her hair still wet from the shower. Behind her at the table, Mallorie and Jada sat with their heads together, huddled over a MacBook, taking turns speaking over each other while they installed its new software.

“What are you two up to?” Valeria asked, glancing over her shoulder.

“Working on my new business.” Mallorie smiled, feeling the sense of pride that came with her answer. “Wanna see?”

“Mmm.” Valeria popped a piece of bacon in her mouth, licking the grease from her fingers. “Hang on.” She shoveled the food onto one big plate and carried it over to the table, taking a seat beside her daughter and propping her chin on her fist. Her eyes narrowed on the laptop. “Where’d you get this from?”

Mallorie bit her lip. “From Craigslist. I needed it for my business.”

Her mother’s voice picked up an ominous sound. “And what did that cost you?”

“$350?” Mallorie cringed, seeing the irritation rise in her mother’s eyes. “But that’s really cheap.”

“They’re usually like $700,” Jada added, trying to help out.

“Mallorie...” Valeria started sternly, but her daughter cut her off.

“Mom, I had to have it. Everything is online now.”

“But we have a computer,” her mother said, waving her hand towards her bedroom.

“Mom, that thing is ancient. And I can’t take it with me. I need to be able to use this on the road, for meetings and things.”

“Meetings?” Her mother’s voice dripped with sarcasm.

“She’s got a partner,” Jada interjected, helping herself to a plate of pancakes.

Mallorie kicked her friend under the table, not ready to explain Armando Martinez to her mother. “I’m just thinking of the future. A girl’s gotta dream, right?”

“Alright, well...,” her mother sighed, “let’s see what you’ve got.”

“It’s cool. You’ll love it.” Mallorie quickly clicked through all their T-shirt designs, displaying the logos and facts. “It gives you a sense at how far women have come. It’s very empowering,” she said, using the word Armando insisted be somewhere on every ad. “And part of the proceeds are going to help build a memorial to these women.”

“If we can find a place to put it,” Jada said in her usual sardonic tone.

Valeria frowned, unnerving the girls with a staid face before breaking into a smile. “I like it.”

Mallorie hugged her in relief. Approval from her mother made her feel a little better as she subtracted another $300 from her ledger and placed her initial order of twenty shirts. But it was still stressful investing the money and it tied her stomach in knots.

Jada emptied her plate and brought it over to the sink, then leaned back against the counter. “So, are we going to the pool or what? It’s almost 2:00.”

“I can’t, Jada...you know that. I have to do research on running this kickstarter, make a web page for the business, open a bank account for the monument fund...”

Jada put her hand up to stop her. “Alright,” she sighed, trying to be understanding. “What can I do to help you?”

“You know what you could do?” Mallorie’s face brightened. “Find me some good-looking local kids who would be willing to model the shirts. And maybe put together some fashion ideas for it. Like in one picture we can pair it with a plaid skirt and a black vest, or maybe with an open long sleeve shirt and an over-the-shoulder bag? Can you do that?”

“Yeah, I can.” Jada smiled, enjoying the idea. She gathered her purse and opened the door, pausing at its threshold. “Hey, maybe I can be a partner too.”

A moment of silence hung between them as Mallorie’s smile thinned. “We can’t...it would cut into our profits...”

“I was just joking.” Jada snapped. “It’s not like you’re really gonna make any money off this anyways.” She turned and briskly walked out the door, leaving it open behind her.

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Buying a business wardrobe the following day was easier than Mallorie expected, as every other store in the city now catered to working women. She’d given herself a budget of $300 and managed to secure two sophisticated but sexy dress suits and a pair of high-heeled shoes. She’d also purchased a gold-plated necklace and bracelet with a portion of the money, wanting to be sure she fully looked the part.

Standing in front of the mirror at home, she tried on the whole ensemble, amazed at how professional it made her feel. She fixed her hair and then struck a pose, before glancing at the clock, hoping she could catch her mother for lunch.

Limousines arrived and departed outside the Wellington Park West with perpetual efficiency, like a golden merry-go-round laden with expensive black thoroughbreds who raced each other forever. Mallorie stood to the side of the employee exit, watching them come and go, convinced rich women all bore the same stern face. Even Katherine Durham, although now that she’d seen the lighter side of the woman, Mallorie had decided she liked her. As if on cue, Brooke suddenly appeared and sauntered out the doors, walking uptown while she talked on her cell phone.

Mallorie raised an eyebrow, carefully dodging around the hustling doormen, busy guests and rolling racks of luggage, and fell into step behind her. She trailed her discreetly for two long blocks, trying to hear her conversation. Brooke stopped on the corner for a light and tucked her phone back in her bag, and then swung her head in Mallorie’s direction.

Mallorie slowed her steps as the girl turned fully towards her.

“Are you following me?” Brooke asked, crossing her arms.

Mallorie froze in her tracks. “Oh...no, I was heading to...”

“I’m just kidding,” Brooke laughed, strolling back to where she was standing. “You’re staying in my hotel, right?”

“The Wellington, yeah,” Mallorie said, relaxing into her stance but still feeling the need for caution.

“How long are you in the city for?” Brooke tilted her head and took a step forward like she hoped they could walk while they talked. Mallorie followed, quickening her steps to keep up with Brooke’s long, fluid strides.

“Another month or two,” Mallorie answered.

“Is your family here on business or...?”

“Vacation. Just my mom and I at the moment.”

“What’s your father do?” she asked.

The question wasn’t unexpected. Mallorie knew she’d be inquisitive as to her social status. Saying you were staying the summer in the most expensive hotel in the city was akin to saying you had money, but Brooke wasn’t familiar with her, which made her a curiosity. The problem was she had no idea how to answer her question, and in the heat of the moment, she said the first thing that came to mind.

“He’s an investor.” She held her breath, praying Brooke wouldn’t ask for more information.

“Mine too,” Brooke said like the subject was boring. She swung her golden hair over her shoulder and gestured down the street. “I was heading over to meet a friend for tea...if you’d like to join us. It’s Louisa St. Claire,” she added, as if Mallorie should know the name.

Mallorie’s lips parted but no words came out. It was an incredible opportunity to really get to know her sister, but she was sure the friend would torment her with more questions. ‘Just pick a story and stick with it,’ she counseled herself, trying to imagine the worst case scenario, a vision which involved her excusing herself and climbing out the bathroom window. “That would be nice...if you really don’t mind.”

“Not at all,” Brooke smiled amiably. “So where are you from? What school do you go to?”

“Oh god,” Mallorie whispered under her breath, her hands already starting to shake.
 
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kaijafon

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oops! lol! when you trail someone, you ALWAYS have to have a story ready in case they spot and confront you. hahaha!

thank you!!!
 

stjwelding

Veteran Member
Thanks Kritter, Mallorie needs to be prepared for questions and have a simple story that is believable and that she can recall and stick to under pressure without getting flustered, Great story.
Wayne
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Lying wasn’t really in Mallorie’s nature, but the situation was what it was. For all Brooke Durham knew, she was from New Hampshire and had attended Choate until the spring. It was all from a book she’d read the year before, but her half-sister accepted every word in good faith.

“I got to play one of the Boars once,” Brooke enthusiastically responded as they entered the lobby of a tall, white-brick building.

“That’s great,” Mallorie said, assuming she meant some kind of athletic team. “How’d you do?”

“I lost.” Brooke laughed. “6-4, 6-7, 6-0.” Her laughter was sweet and delicate, and it reminded Mallorie of the wind chimes that used to dangle off the sign at the Chinese take-out. In contrast, her own voice sounded harsh and deep, and she consciously tried to lighten her tone, without sounding like she'd just inhaled helium. Strolling towards the elevator banks, Mallorie suddenly realized they weren’t going out for tea, but rather having it in someone’s apartment.

“You’ll like Louisa, she’s a hoot,” Brooke said as they rose towards the building’s 9th floor. “Just don’t let her intimidate you,” she whispered as the elevator doors opened again.

Entering Louisa St. Claire’s living room was like stumbling into a Victorian boudoir. Tufted-velvet chairs sat against floral-papered walls, and silk curtains, bound with braided tassels, hung luxuriously behind a roomful of polished, mahogany furniture. The walls were decorated with a dozen paintings, each encompassed by an overly-ornate gilded frame. Louisa stood in the middle of it all, looking perfectly at home in her surroundings. She wasn’t a teenager, like Mallorie had expected, but rather a dignified-looking woman in her thirties with a pageboy haircut, wearing a long, beaded gown and several looping strands of pearls.

“Louisa, hello.” Brooke greeted the woman warmly, before swinging her hand to the side. “This is my friend Mallorie...from the hotel.”

Louisa crossed her arms, relaxing back on one leg. “Well, how interesting,” she said, looking the young woman over. “You must come tell me all about yourself.” She gestured towards a gold leaf couch.

“There isn’t much to tell.” Mallorie swallowed, quickly changed the subject. “You have such a lovely home.”

“You think so?” The woman looked around the room, as if reacquainting herself with her surroundings. “I like it, but Brooke here thinks it’s dull.”

“It’s hideous and old fashioned.” Brooke laughed.

“To each his own,” Louisa dismissed her, reclining on an armchair, a low, beveled-glass table between them. “At least Mallorie has good taste. So what have you been up to, Brooke?” she asked, leaning forward in her seat.

“Eventing, eventing,” Brooke replied as if it was the most boring thing in the world, a view Mallorie took as well while the two women chatted on about dressage and cross-country jumping.

Louisa finally turned in her direction. “Mallorie, do you ride?”

“No.” She shook her head.

“Really?” Louisa chuckled like it was an inconceivable answer. “Although I guess boarding is rather expensive.”

“It’s not that,” Mallorie said, thwarting her attempt to categorize her wealth. “I just don’t find it very interesting.”

Louisa’s eyebrows rose as she glanced at Brooke with a look of pleasant surprise. “We’re boring our guest,” she declared with delight, leaning back in her chair, studying Brooke with fresh interest while the maid appeared to pour the tea. “So what else, then?” she kindly changed the subject.

Brooke’s dark eyelashes made a slow sweep up and down, as if thinking of something dreamy. “Well, I signed up for the Big Sister project, as a volunteer.”

Louisa sighed with disapproval, shaking her head at Mallorie. “Our Brooke, the bleeding heart.”

“There’s nothing wrong with giving back,” Brooke said, her voice softening considerably.

“If it makes you happy,” Louisa sniffed.

“It really does. You know my parents were hardly home when I was growing up. All we had was Fredda...”

“Oh, that’s right,” Louisa interrupted. “That ridiculous German au pair of yours. I never did like that woman.”

“She wasn’t very nice," Brooke admitted. "So when I think of these kids who have no mom at all...”

“That’s so cool of you,” Mallorie said, feeling a sense of admiration.

“Wait till she sees what they’ll stick her with,” Louisa laughed. “You wouldn’t find me within twenty feet of one of those ghetto children.”

A crescent grin snaked across Mallorie’s face. “Oh, I don’t know about that.”

“It’s true,” Louisa insisted, before changing the subject again. They talked about their mutual friends and their charity work, and Mallorie could only stare at Brooke with growing fondness. She was so much nicer than Mallorie had expected, and so docile compared to the nasty rich kids she’d seen portrayed on TV. She began to feel hopeful that maybe some day she could tell Brooke who she was, a pleasant thought made bittersweet by the memory of her many lies.

The hour dissolved as quickly as the sugar cubes in their tea, followed by a brisk walk back to the hotel. They passed under its emerald canopy, embroiled in a conversation about the band Brooke liked when Mallorie suddenly stopped in her tracks. Valeria Ortiz was standing not ten feet away, glaring at her with murder in her eyes.

“Oooh shit,” Mallorie whispered, discreetly shaking her head, begging her mother not to say a word.
 
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Kritter

The one and only...
The apartment was dusky, the lights not yet turned on as Mallorie walked in behind her mother. The fan sat inanimate - a tall watcher in its dark corner. The air was hot and stagnant. The curtains hung still, not sucking in and out with the wind, as if they too held their collective breath in dread of the coming lecture. Her mother had mercifully left the hotel without saying a word, but she was waiting when Mallorie stepped off the bus - which was an anxiety-laden twenty-five block ride in its own right.

“Mom...” Mallorie had started.

“No.” Valeria lifted a finger, silencing her daughter while she gathered her thoughts, rubbing her hands together from nerves. “I understand...I didn’t make myself clear. When I said you weren’t to bother Matthew Durham, I should have extended that to his family as well. I just didn’t think,” her voice started to rise in anger with each additional word, “that you’d be stupid enough to talk to his daughter.”

“But she’s my sis...”

“Clearly,” her mother cut her off, her boiling point already reached, “you have no idea who you’re dealing with. So let me put this another way. That man...,” she pointed out the window, “is extremely dangerous, and you will stay far away from him...and his family. Do you understand me?”

“But why,” Mallorie whined, so frustrated she could barely put her thoughts to words. “I like Brooke. This is so stupid.”

“Maybe you think you’re exempt somehow,” her mother artificially sweetened her words, “because you’re a teenager or because you’re his daughter...,” her tone quickly darkened again. “But I assure you...you’re not. And if he finds out...” She rubbed her face with her hands, not able to finish her sentence.

“He lives in Jersey,” Mallorie argued.

“He works in the city,” her mother countered.

“Downtown.”

“Close...enough. Look, if you won’t do this for yourself, then do it for me,” Valeria said, lowering her head and turning away. “I can not afford to lose this money.”

Mallorie badly wanted to scream, “who cares about the money,” but she was mature enough to recognize it was the difference between them having their own apartment or sharing some run-down dump. And then there was the promise of a paid college tuition, which Mallorie fully intended to make use of. “But...” she started weakly, her energy for arguing already depleted. “I like Brooke.”

“Then wait until after college,” her mother said gently. “You can be bff’s all you want with her then.”

Mallorie's breath came out like a deflating balloon. “Why would he be...” she began, but her mind already knew the answer. He had a family and a good reputation, and she was like a bomb on a stray B-52, circling Manhattan, capable of destroying both if she really wanted - so of course he had to make sure she kept her distance. But if she could just meet with him and explain that she had no bad intentions. At the banquet. Wait till the banquet, she silently told herself, her eyes turning towards her computer.

---

High-energy dance music blared from the speakers that encircled the photographer’s studio. The man moved more than the models did, adjusting his height and angle as he danced around them, calling out instructions, his camera flashing wildly with each pass. The girls looked amazing, wearing the clothing combinations that Jada had designed, which were a mixture of punk and hip hop.

“Your friend has a very good eye for this,” Armando said, studying the prior set of shots on the photographer’s computer.

“Yeah, Jada’s great with fashion.” Mallorie smiled, incredibly pleased with the look and quality of the T-shirts.

“It’s gonna be hard to choose which ones to use.” Armando bent over the table, clicking on one picture after another, his body moving in time to the music.

Mallorie found herself staring at him, wishing she didn’t find him so attractive, and it wasn’t just his beautiful face. He was intelligent and confident, and he looked incredibly good in a suit. But he’d mentioned he had a girlfriend at their second meeting, and she’d called him in the middle of the third.

“Mallorie. Mallorie?” he repeated, rousing her from her thoughts and nodding her closer. “Which ones do you like best?”

She started walking towards him, her mind in the clouds, and suddenly she tripped and fell sprawling to the ground, her foot caught under a power cord. Then the light pole that it was attached to fell over her back and rolled inelegantly down her legs. “Oh god,” she gasped, glancing up, still a little disoriented.

“Are you okay?” Armando laughed, his hands reaching out for hers, his eyes and smile lit with amusement.

“Yeah, I’m just a klutz,” she frowned, taking his hands, noting his deliciously strong grip as he pulled her easily to her feet.

“Are you sure?” he asked again, looking her over.

“Yes.” She blushed, dusting her hands off and then brushing them across her knees. “How embarrassing.”

“But adorable,” he said with a smile.
 
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DustMusher

Deceased
Ooh the many NSA alarms I probably set off with that chapter..

Fantastic story -- I am checking for new entries two or three times a day (well to be truthful, more than that) great premise and has so many ways to go to live up to the title.

Also love the en ess aey comment, might even turn them into Moar roarers - can just see the whole agency sending the troops to make you finish the story <G>.

Thank you

DM
 

Kritter

The one and only...
Each number on the ledger was carefully written, their lines sharp and straight. Mallorie subtracted another $450 from its total, her half-share of the photographer’s fee for two hours. Initially, she had balked at the price, but Armando had insisted. The photos were the most important part of their site, so they had to be done by a professional.

Jada waited by the door in a dark blue bathing suit wrapped in a terry cloth robe. She cleared her throat loudly.

“I’m coming, I swear.” Mallorie laughed, double-checking her email before grabbing her beach bag and tucking the laptop inside it.

“Come on, don’t bring that,” Jada moaned. “Someone gonna steal it.”

“Oh, you’re right.” Mallorie pulled it back out. “I guess I can use your iPhone.”

“Whatever,” her friend said with annoyance. “Can we just go?”

“Yeah, just a sec.” Mallorie raced to her bedroom and grabbed the envelope that held the final prints, wanting Jada’s opinion on the photos.

“We’re gonna miss the train.”

“I’m coming,” Mallorie said, rushing back to her room twice more for a camera and a pen. “Okay, ready.” She stood at the door and looked around the apartment, patting her hands against the air, satisfied everything was in order.

“You’re just like your mother.” Jada started walking down the thread-bare carpet in the hallway of the building, lumbering from the weight of her oversized bag which held a folding chair, a radio and a lunch cooler.

“No. My mother is chaotic and disorganized,” Mallorie said, locking the door and following behind her. “I...am organized.”

“You’re still just like her.” Jada lowered her bag, waiting on the elevator. “You come up with a place for the monument yet?”

“No,” Mallorie sighed. “I was hoping we could do it in one of the local parks, but every one of them denied it.”

“What about the shipyard?” Jada asked. “There’s nothing there. It’s all run down looking and that’s where they actually worked. It could be like, not just a monument to them, but to the shipyard itself.”

“That...is such a great idea. I love it,” Mallorie said. “That man there...what was his name?”

“Mr. Gant?”

“Do you still have his number?”

“Yeah. Not on me...but at home.”

“Good. I’ll call him tomorrow.” She stepped onto the elevator behind her friend. “I’m sure they won’t say ‘no.’”

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Colorful umbrellas and towels dotted the sand in Coney Island. Laughter from the kids in the ocean mixed with shouts from the rides on the boardwalk. Seagulls hovered above the crowds, melodically crying out whenever they spotted food. And behind it all was the soft lull of the waves as they rhythmically broke against shore. The girls walked towards the water, making their way around an obstacle course of people and blankets, the radios around them playing everything from rap to pop to salsa.

“You picked the perfect day,” Mallorie said, squinting up at the pristine blue sky before dropping her bag and staking her claim on a little square foot of beach.

“If you don’t count the six you backed out of,” Jada mumbled, setting up her chair. “I can’t believe July’s almost over.” She pulled her radio out and started digging through her bag for the sunblock.

“I know, it’s going so fast.” Mallorie spread her towel out and laid belly down on it, before leaning back up on her elbows. “Let me show you the pictures,” she said, carefully sliding a manila envelope out of her backpack.

Jada’s face dropped. “You already did the photo shot? I thought you were gonna call me?”

“Oh, yeah, a few days ago.” Mallorie cringed. “I’m so sorry. I totally forgot you wanted to come.”

“No you didn’t,” Jada said, not caring to hide her thoughts. “You blew me off because wanted to be alone with Armando.”

Mallorie laughed. “No, really, I did. Forget...I mean,” she said, trying to cover up the truth, although Jada wasn’t wrong. It was distracting enough having to deal with so many things without having a friend tag along. And she did prefer to be alone with Armando.

Jada took the photos roughly from her hands and gave them a quick look through. “They’re alright,” she said with disinterest, laying them down on the edge of Mallorie’s blanket.

Mallorie sighed. “Are you gonna be mad all day now?”

Jada looked away. “No, it’s all right,” she finally said. “So...yesterday I was over by the school, and I stopped in and told that old man he has to get someone from his family to go get his trumpet, but he says he don't have any family nearby.”

Mallorie rolled onto her back and squinted at her friend. “Why do you even still care?”

“I dunno.” Jada shrugged, leaning her head back to relax in the sun. “I just know if I was old and I was missing something, I’d want someone to care.” She lowered her sunglasses and closed her eyes. “I wish they’d play the new Ciara song.”

“Yeah, or maybe Phillip Phillips.”

“Who who?” Jada lifted her glasses and glanced at Mallorie sideways. “Who’s that?”

“Some country singer who Brooke likes. He’s not bad, actually.”

“Country....” Jada repeated sarcastically, letting the word hang in the air.
 
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The one and only...
No one smiled on the subway. Everyone looked tired and dragged down from their day, their eyes blank and unfocused. Stations rolled by one after another, and in between there were long stretches of depressing darkness; part of that strange, otherworldly void that lurked beneath the city. The only sound to be heard at all was the girls’ subdued giggles. Happy to have found two seats together, they spoke in the hushed tone reserved for secretive gossip, trying to imagine how Mallorie’s mother met Matthew Durham.

“He probably saw her bending over a bed,” Jada laughed. “And he was like ‘Valeria...I must have you!’”

“Oh, Matthew,” Mallorie gushed, batting her eyes and fanning herself like she was Scarlett O'Hara.

“But I’m sorry, my love,” Jada said, trying to keep a straight face as she pushed her away. “We cannot be together.”

Mallorie's eyes widened. "But...but all dat money!” she said, causing them both to double over laughing. “Seriously, though,” she mused. “I wonder how long they were really together?”

“Guy like that? Bet it wasn’t more than a few weeks.”

“That’s sad.” Mallorie lifted her foot and rubbed her finger between her toes, trying to get rid of the sand. Her hair was still damp from the salty water, her nose and shoulders reddened by the sun. Jada took her iPhone out and started flipping through her emails. Mallorie leaned over her shoulder to read them.

"Armando told me I should start a fashion blog on the side," she remembered to mention, "to cross promote the T-shirts, so I have to start taking pictures of cool outfits I see on people on the street. Wanna help me?"

“I do, but,” Jada pursed her lips and looked away. “Not if you’re gonna keep pretending I don’t exist whenever you guys have meetings. I mean, include me or don’t include me, you know what I’m saying?”

“I’m sorry.” Mallorie hung her head, but she wasn’t really sure what more to say. Jada was fun and business was business and she couldn’t see the two things fitting together. But she hated to disappoint her friend. “We’re gonna be doing the kickstarter video next week I think, if you wanna...”

“Yeah. I’ll come,” Jada answered enthusiastically before she’d even finished her sentence.

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July ended with a week of rain. The clouded skies washed the color from the city, casting it in dark shades of gray. Potholes became puddles and tiny rivers ran along each curb. It was a dismal way to mark summer’s half-time, but then August blew in with sunshine and a nice cool breeze and July was quickly forgotten. Central park was loaded with people enjoying the glorious weather. Families and lovers spread blankets out for picnics and children ran with kites. Mallorie strolled along the trails, her camera at the ready, hoping to capture a few nice fashion pictures for her blog. She weaved in and out of the trees, attempting to keep her snapshots candid, and then wandered towards the sound of little kids playing in the park.

“Mallorie...” a voice called out to her, distant but familiar. She spun, looking in all directions. “Mallorie!” She heard it again, sure that it was Brooke Durham, and pinpointed her location on the other side of a playground. Mallorie quickly glanced around, making sure her mother wasn’t there, not convinced that she wasn't spying on them from afar.

“Hey, what’s up?” she asked nervously as Brooke approached her, holding hands with a sullen-faced, little girl.

“I’m so glad to see you. I thought you’d left,” she said, dragging the child out in front of her. “This is Clara. She’s my ‘little sister’...from the agency?” she said, checking to see if Mallorie still remembered.

“Oh! Well hello Clara,” Mallorie said sweetly, reaching out to shake a small brown hand. The girl barely smiled, her fingers anxiously twisting around a braided pigtail. Her eyes were sad and round, and she looked uncomfortable and lost.

“She’s bored out of her mind,” Brooke whispered, pulling Mallorie aside while the child sat down on a bench. “I don’t know what to do with her.”

“She doesn’t like the park?” Mallorie questioned.

“No, or the zoo or the duck pond...” she said, sounding distressed. “Maybe you can help me. She might...” She paused, choosing her words carefully. “She might take better to you.”

Mallorie rolled her eyes at Brooke, before examining the unhappy child. She wouldn’t have minded helping, but she knew her mother would kill her if she caught her near her sister again. “I'm sorry, I’d really like to help you, but..”

“Please,” Brooke begged, a look of desperation in her eyes. “If not for me...for her?”

“It’s not that...” Mallorie started, before swallowing her words, frowning at the spiritless child. A heavy sigh escaped her lips. “What about the movies? Have you tried the movies? There’s a new kid's movie out,” she said, turning to Clara before Brooke could even answer. “Do you wanna go see The Smurfs? We can get popcorn and soda...” she offered, reaching her hand out to the girl with an enticing smile.

The child shrugged and nodded, returning to her feet, sucking on a knuckle as she walked timidly over to Mallorie.

“Thank you so much,” Brooke whispered, taking Mallorie’s arm. “Come on. The limo’s right over here.”
 
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Rabbit

Has No Life - Lives on TB
Oh no! I'm all caught up. I have been holding off reading so I could read a whole bunch of chapters all in a row and now I've got to wait. Good story Kritter and I need more quick as you can please.
 
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