Story (Demon Hunters) The Demon in Town

gonewacky

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(Demon Hunters) The Demon in Town


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In April of 1921 in Deer Ridge 12 year old Danny and 11 year old Billy were peeking in the church window.

Billy insisted, “I don’t see him.”

Danny replied, “He’s in the box in front of the pulpit.”

Billy whispered, “I thought he’d be in a coffin.”

Danny replied, “Silly fool. That’s what the box is, a coffin.”

The organ music stopped and the Pastor announced, “Thank you, sister. Brothers and sisters, we are congregated here today to pay homage to our dear brother, Louis Anderson. We all know that Louis Anderson was a good boy.

He didn’t always show up to Sunday school on Sunday, but we never saw him at the bootlegger’s on Saturday night, either.”

Someone in the congregation bellowed, “Amen.”

The Pastor went on, “We’re all going to miss this fine youth. The good lord must have had a powerful reason to want to take him so young in life. 19 years is short time to be with us.

The congregation of about 20 people watched intensely as the Pastor continued, “But we all know that the lord moves in mysterious ways and today...”

Then the lid of the coffin started opening, and they could see a hand pushing up the lid. Someone yelled, “He’s alive!”

Louis sat up questioning, “Who in tarnation put me in that coffin?”

Panic took over and everyone started screaming and running from the church.

The Pastor insisted, “Brethren, let’s not give way to panic. A small mistake seems to have been made.”



Everyone had fled from the church and was outside. A Wagon and team was nested in-between two Model T Ford’s with a Buggy off to the side. They looked on in fear as Louis came from the church. He questioned, “Now, what’s going on around here?”

His father replied, “Son, we was about to bury you.”

Louis exclaimed, “Bury me?”

His mother held tight to his father’s arm saying, “We were real certain that you’d died day before yesterday.”

Louis insisted, “Died? Well, that’s silly.”

Louis’s father revealed, “Doc Bolton pronounced you dead.”

The Doctor spoke up, “That’s right, son. Your heart stopped beating two days ago. I was at the bedside.”

Louis insisted, “Well, I... That couldn’t be. I’m-I’m breathing now.”

The Doctor went on, “He sure wasn’t beating day before yesterday. You was sick, son. Real sick. Worst case of flu I’ve ever come across in my whole medical career. I’m surprised he lasted past last Wednesday.”

Louis disclosed, “Well, I hate to cast a shadow on your medical career Doc, but I’m not gonna crawl back in that coffin just to save face with you.”

The doctor insisted, “Yes sir. There was no question about it. There was no pulse.”

Louis declared, “Well, I’m sure glad you didn’t embalm me.”

Louis’s father asked, “How do you feel now son?”

Louis replied, “Well, I feel good. I feel a little weak, but rested and hungry. I could eat the hide off a hog. I’m real hungry.”

His mother insisted, “I reckon you should be. I know you ain’t eaten for three days.”

Louis exclaimed as he walked to his parents, “Ma! Pa! Surprise! I sure hope you got a good supper on the calendar.”

They backed away from him in fear as Louis questioned, What’s the matter? You act like I’m some sort of ghost or something. Well, I’ll be double-dogged.



My own folks are scared of me. Maryann? I bet you ain’t scared of me. I’m the man you’re going to marry.”

Maryann backed away from him in fear as well.

Louis admitted, “Well, I guess you are at that.”

Then he set his sights on his ten year old sister Nancy saying, “Nancy? Now, you ain’t a-scared of me, are ya?”

Nancy ran to him exclaiming, “Louis, you fooled them, didn’t you Louis?

Dropping to one knee Louis gave Nancy a hug as he bubbled, “Yeah honey, I fooled them.”

Louis father said, “Son.”

Followed by his mother exclaiming, “Son! Praise be. We ain’t lost you after all son.”

The Doctor exclaimed, “I know what it is. I know what the miracle that happened here in our county. The Medical term for it it’s Cotard delusion animation. Very rare. Matter of fact, there’s been only 30 cases in the past 1,500 years.”

One man insisted, “Ain’t you just trying to cover up for your own miscalculations doc? I ain’t never heard of a sickness like that.”

The Doctor replied, “Ain’t likely you would only 30 cases in 1,500 years, and all them were in Europe. Best thing for you to do is quit trying to slander my name and take him home, give him some soup. He’ll need some rest.

Louis insisted, “Yeah, I... I’m a mite weak.”

Louis’s father replied, “Bless you. We’ll get you right on home just as soon as I crank up the car.”

His mother took ahold of his arm and gave it a tug, “I’ll fry you a nice rabbit. I’m sorry I acted so funny Louis. It was just that... It was so sudden. Sure nice to have you back.

Louis uttered, “Oh, thank you kindly Ma, but I ain’t never been away.”



Two weeks later at breakfast Louis announced, “That was a heaping good breakfast, ma. Well, I guess I’ll get over to that east 40 and mend that fence.”

Louis’s mother insisted, “Oh, I wish you wouldn’t. It’s only been two weeks since you was at the brink of the grave. You ought not be toiling from sunup to sundown.”

Louis assured, “I feel great ma. I never felt better in my life. I’ll see you down there pa.”

His father replied, “All right.”

Louis went out the door and his mother revealed, “I’m real concerned. I just don’t like the way he’s behaved the last two weeks.”

His father asked, “What do you mean?”

She replied, “He’s different. He’s not like he was at all.”

The father insisted, “Seems the same to me.”

She explained, “He only ate two eggs again. Why ever since he’s sprouted teeth he’s been having three eggs at breakfast.”

The father replied, “Well, a man’s taste can change.”

She went on, “And he goes around fiddling with things night and day. And the way he goes at that hard work. Why, he was never that friendly with work before.”

The father agreed, “Yes that’s true.”

She added, “I recollect worrying many times that he leaned just a shade towards the side of shiftlessness. Not lazy exactly but... No, just uninterested. Since his sickness, he’s been fighting in that work just like he was a year behind.”

Looking at Nancy staring at them her mother insisted, “All right big ears, you run down to the mailbox and wait for the mailman. I’m expecting a new seed catalog. Sure hope it gets here.”



Danny and Billy were at the mail boxes horsing around with a slingshot. Danny announced, “Make way for the queen!”

There were six mail boxes all in a row, and Nancy checked theirs. Billy informed, “He ain’t been here, yet.”

Nancy asked, “Can I shoot it?

Danny barked, “No! This isn’t a girl toy. Go get a doll or something.”

Billy asked, “How’s your brother?”

Nancy replied, “All right, I reckon. Only ma and pa are a little bit concerned about the way he’s been behaving lately.”

Billy asked, “How’s he been acting?”

Nancy revealed, “I don’t know just... different. He eats different, works different, always fiddling with things.”

Danny looked at Billy and insisted, “It ain’t none of your business Billy. Let’s go.”

Later that afternoon Sophia was over visiting Billy’s mom. Sophia exclaimed, “All the men have been gathering down at the store.”

Caroline replied, “Is that a fact? Well, I was wondering if you’d heard anything.”

Sophia added, “Well, as a matter of fact, I have heard a little something.”

Caroline butted in, “Just a minute. You run out and play.”

Billy asked, “Why? I wanna listen.”

Caroline insisted, “You go on now. Scoot.”

Billy whined, “Aw, shucks.”

Caroline explained, “Little pitchers have big ears.”

Sophia went on, “Well now, I know for a fact that those poor folks are scared to death. Why he’s been acting like a complete stranger ever since the funeral. Yes sir, I mean, I sure wouldn’t want to go sleep in a house with that boy around. Not me. They say he’s started fiddling with things now, like axes.”

Caroline insisted, “I don’t know. He was always such a good boy.”
 

gonewacky

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Down at the store some men had gathered. The Doctor came in and was asked, “What do you say doc? We was just discussing about that Anderson boy.”

The Doc. questioned, “Yeah, what about him?”

The man replied, “Oh, just wondering about him. I guess you’ve heard how peculiar he’s acted lately.”

Doc. Replied, “Yeah, I heard. I ain’t one to pass on gossip.”

The man went on, “Still, you got to wonder. Where was he those 48 hours he was supposed to be dead? He had to be somewhere if he was dead. Even Doc. says he had that rare sickness.”

The Doctor replied, “Maybe I told a white lie, Strauss. Maybe I was thinking of his folks’ feelings when I brought up that disease.

Strauss requested, “Can you straighten that out?”

The Doctor replied, “I’m not the kind of man to send a body to the grave unless I’m positive he’s dead. You know me better than that.”

Strauss agreed, “Shoot yes, we know you doc.”

The Doctor went on, “I did more than just feel that boy’s pulse. When his folks left the room, I gave him the pin test. I stabbed him with a pin. He didn’t even flicker. Then I held a mirror to his lips. If there was any life left in the man at all, his breath would fog up the mirror.”

Strauss asked, “Well, what happened then?”

The Doc. argued, “I pronounced him dead, didn’t I?”

Becker asked, “Then where could he have been for them 48 hours?”

The Doctor insisted, “Why don’t we just come out and say it? We’re all thinking it.”

Strauss insisted, “You say it Becker. You got the floor.”

Becker asserted, “I’ll say it. You’re dadgum right I’ll say it. How do we know the man who got up and crawled out of that coffin is really Louis Anderson?”

Gene spoke up, “I wouldn’t talk like that gentlemen. It could cause a lot of trouble.”

Lawrence jumped in, “Well, I don’t know. My grandma, she used to tell me about evil spirits roaming around the world trying to find a body to take over. She said that they’d steal a corpse sometime before a man was good dead.”

Becker insisted, “That kind of talk’s dangerous Lawrence. Although I must confess this throws a lot of dry kindling on the fire that’s been smoldering in my brain ever since the funeral.

The Doctor announced, “Have a good day gents.”

Over at Maryann’s house her brother announced, “It’s him dagnabbit, Maryann now’s the time to tell him.”

Maryann asked, “Right now? No. I don’t tell you who to see. And you leave me alone.”

Her mother insisted, “Well, maybe your brother’s right dear. You know what everyone in the county is saying about him.”

Maryann insisted, “Well, he’s not visiting the county. He’s visiting me.

Maryann’s brother growled, “Well, you’re just plain rotten stubborn. I bet all your kids are born with horns.”

Maryann barked, “You two just get on into the kitchen and let me entertain my guest.

Maryann announced opening the door, “Well, bless my soul! Look at who’s here. Well, come on in this house.”

Louis asked, “And how’s your ma and Robert?”

Maryann replied, “Just fine. How’s your folks?”

Louis handed the flowers wrapped in newspaper as he replied, “Just fine, except ma. She’s gonna be madder than a hornet tomorrow.”

Maryann questioned, “Mad?”

Louis revealed, “Yeah. You see, I, uh, I robbed her pet rose vine just so I could bring you a bouquet.”

Maryann insisted, “Oh, you ought not to have done that.”

Louis declared, “Oh, it’s not much.”

Maryann opened the flowers and was shocked to see they were dead, and had turned black. Louis questioned, “They’re dead, aren’t they?”

Maryann replied, “I guess them roses don’t last very long. When did you pick them?”

Louis informed, “Oh, I picked them just before I came over here.”

Maryann suggested, “Oh, well. Why don’t we have some music?”

Louis replied, “Yeah, I’d like that.”

Maryann put a record on the Victrola revealing, “We just bought a new country blues record last week.”

Louis replied, “Yeah, I see you did.”

He stepped close and tried to put his arms around her. She jumped back and cried, “Don’t touch me.”

Louis asked, “What’s the matter with you?”

Maryann replied, “I’m sorry. Just the way those flowers died. Maybe you’ve got poison on your hands.”

Louis insisted, “I ain’t got no poison on my hands, and you know it. That’s not what is bothering you. Everywhere I go it’s just the same. I expect it from the others but not from you Maryann. I’m getting sick and tired the way everybody treats me like a vampire.”

Maryann replied, “Oh, Louis.”

Louis questioned, “Now you tell me. Are you my girl or not?”

Then Louis got mad and stomped out the door. Maryann’s mother came in and ask, “Well, land’s sakes, child, you’re scared half to death. What’d he do?”

Maryann insisted, “Nothing.”

Robert came in demanding, “It’s time to put a stop to this. After all, I’m the man of the family.”

Maryann insisted, “He didn’t do nothing wrong.”

Robert responded, “I ain’t liked him since we were both three years old.”



Back at the store the men had gathered again to talk about Louis.

Strauss insisted, “That man is dangerous enough to kill with his bare hands.”

Doc. Agreed, “That’s exactly what I’m afraid of, gentlemen.”

Lawrence added, “We seem to be living with something evil in our midst, and we got to put a stop to it.”

Gene added, “We’ve all discussed what we’re gonna do, and I for one can’t see any reason for putting it off any longer.”

Lawrence asked, “You through talking now?”

Out on the Anderson farm.

Maryann revealed, “I rode out to warn you. There’s a group of men coming out from town. They’re gonna ask you to move out of the country.”

Louis asked, “Well now, how do you feel about that Maryann?”

Maryann replied, “Well, I’m a fickle woman, Louis. I’m the kind who believes whatever is said by them I’m with. I’ve heard some bad things said about you, and sometimes I ain’t strong enough to turn a deaf ear to them, but in my heart, I reckon I love you or else I wouldn’t be here with you now.”

Louis explained, “I got a great love for you Maryann, and I want you to marry me. I reckon you better give me your answer right now.”

The men rode up in a Wagon and got out standing before Louis

The Doc insisted, “Gents. What do you say?”

Strauss announced, “Louis, we are here as a committee to speak for the community.

Becker added, “Now, we talked this all over and we came to the conclusion that Louis Anderson is dead.

Lawrence informed, “We think you’re a Demon.”

Gene insisted, “That’s right. We don’t know who you are or where you come from. We figure you stole Louis’s body. We don’t even like you as a neighbor. So we’re asking you to move out. Move out, you hear?”

Doc insisted, “What do you say, Louis?”

Louis replied, “Well, I think that depends on Maryann. I just asked her a question and she ain’t answered it, yet.”

Maryann revealed, “I reckon I’m with you no matter where we have to go.”

Louis insisted, “Then you stand behind me. Gents, my wife-to-be and me was born and raised in this county. We like it, and we don’t aim to raise our kids anyplace else. Now, you...”

Lawrence butted in, “Wait a minute now!”

Louis demanded, “We’re gonna stay, and that means just two things. One, if you’re wrong about me. Then you ain’t got anything to worry about, because that means I’m just a poor old country boy by the name of Louis Anderson. But on the other hand, if you’re right about me, then you better start treating me pretty nice because you just don’t. Think of all of the trouble I can cause you. I might wave my right hand and bring a whole grove of locusts down on your crops. Then I might wave my left hand and dry up all your wells. Then I might snap my fingers and burn a barn or two. And then some morning if I get up and I feel exceptionally ornery, I might have the hawks come down and steal your chickens. Yes sir. You folks better start treating me and mine real nice.”

Doc. Insisted, “Well, that’s a different picture Louis, with you aiming to marry Maryann. We sure ain’t wanting to hurt her none. Yes sir, it’d sure be wrong to hurt her trying to get at somebody else. When are you fixing on marrying her, Louis?”

Maryann insisted, “Right away, I reckon.”

Doc insisted, “Well, let us know about it, boy. We’ll picnic that day. Well, come on gents. They got a lot of talking to do.”

Maryann asked, “You couldn’t really do all that could you?”

Louis laughed an Evil laugh, “Of course not. I hate lying to them, but I find that when something comes up, you’ve gotta cope with it.”

Louis put a pipe in his mouth and pulled out a match. He held the matchstick in the air and it lit all by itself. Maryann questioned, “How’d you do that?”

Louis asked, “Do what?”

Maryann insisted, “Light that match? You didn’t strike it on anything. It just lit.”

Louis insisted, “Maryann, honey first thing you’ve got to learn is not to imagine things.”
 

gonewacky

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viking-s2.jpgBack in Dention time stopped and Najl appeared in the middle of the street. Jim, Albert, Suzy, and Kathy all stood before him. Najl hit his axe on the ground and a shock wave traveled across the ground, and the Truck appeared behind them. Najl spoke as thunder echoing from the sky, “Spectrum Goddess make our Time Lord invisible.”

Kathy shot Jim with a little spark and he disappeared. Then Najl ordered, “Spectrum Goddess, Time Lord go forth and identify our Demon. Then return.”

Kathy faded out and Najl hit his axe on the ground. Then Jim and Kathy appeared at the edge of a field. There were two Wagons one had a bunch of men getting on it. Standing next to the other one was Louis and Maryann. Kathy pointed to Louis and whispered, “He’s the demon and pure Evil. That body has no soul.”

Jim put his hand on Kathy and in a flash they were back before Najl. Then Najl hit his axe handle on the ground and they became visible. Then Najl put out his hand and called, “Bird.”

The Crow flew to him and landed on his hand. Then he whispered in the bird’s ear, and ordered, “Go to the one you Love.”

The crow flew to Suzy and landed on her shoulder. Then Najl disclosed, “We’re saving this young woman from a life time of hell. Without our help she will become a slave to this Demon. It is already happening as I speak. The bird will undo what the Demon has done, but Love Goddess you will need to give her twice as much Love. Now go forth!”

With that they all appeared in the field with the truck behind them. They were facing Louis and Maryann. Louis saw the Demon Hunters and pulled Maryann in front of him. This made Albert call out, “Truck on.”

Time stopped and Albert yelled, “Clutch pedal in Winch P.T.O. low, Clutch out!”

Then Albert made a loop in the cable and approached the Demon. Then Albert whipped the cable over its head. As soon as the cable touched the Demon he came to life grabbing the cable. He gave it a jerk and the Truck slid forward. He pulled the noose from his head and in a deep howling voice bellowed, “Ha, you can’t trick me like that.”

Jim blinked behind him and blinked him a thousand feet in the air and blinked to Maryann. Then he blinked her out, as the Demon laughed an evil laugh drifting to the ground. Landing back in front of them he waved his hand, and a Dust Storm came up. Kathy shot Albert with a little spark and he disappeared. Then she waved her hand and the dust storm was gone. Then she waved her hand again and it was just the Demon and her in the woods. Kathy walked right up in front of the Demon and exclaimed, “You’ve never seen a Goddess like me before. I’m one of a kind.”

Then she made a cloud and blew it to his head and exclaimed, “Albert now!”

Albert whipped the cable over its head and ordered, Winch P.T.O. Reverse High clutch pedal out. The cable snapped tight and jerked the Demon from his feet and drug him across the ground as Albert followed yelling, “Back to hell with you Demon.”

Then a black cloud in the shape of a hideous monster rose up into the air. It was twisting around as it made a squalling sound. Then it was sucked into the ground.

Kathy’s forest faded away, and she shot Albert with a spark. Then she clapped her hands and the cloud disappeared. Jim blinked back with Maryann and the bird flew straight to her head. Then she collapsed to the ground, so Jim picked her up and set her in the back of the Wagon.

Then Suzy took over pushing Love into her. Suzy pushed a ball of bright flashing colored light into Maryann as Kathy walked up. Suzy smiled and pushed love into Kathy saying, “Good job, I didn’t even have to shoot a lightning bolt this time.”

Kathy put her hand on Suzy and little flickering stars surrounded where Kathy touched her, as they exploded with little flashes. Kathy informed, “If you want to see Cry Baby, the water Girl, or take the trip on the steam boat with me. Just let me know I’ll share that with you.”



Then they all gathered in front of the truck, and Suzy threw a ball of bright flashing colored light in the air, and shot it with a lightning bolt. Thousands of little flashing stars rained down on them as Jim blinked them to the farm in 1982.



No one was there and Jim and Albert had to dispose of the body themselves. Suzy was talking to Kathy and she just disappeared. Suzy just assumed she was summoned by another team for her power.

Kathy appeared in front of Najl as he spoke softly, “My dear child I see you stopped the Demon’s Dust Storm. The power of light has no power over such things. How did you do this?”

Kathy explained, “I don’t know. It just came into my thoughts and I tried it.”

Najl affirmed, “You are a very powerful Goddess child, but don’t let your power take over you.”

Kathy disclosed, “I understand I’m part of the Love Goddess, and everything I use my power for must be for Love. It’s like there’s this little voice in me that asks is this for love every time I do something.”

Najl insisted, “You listen to that voice child, and you’ll become unstoppable. Now let me share something with you.”

Then in a flash they were way up north watching the aurora borealis. Najl insisted, “You can add this to your memories, maybe put it over your town some night. This would please me.”

Then in a flash Kathy was back with Suzy, and she asked, “Where did you go?”

Kathy replied, “Najl talked to me. I thought I was in trouble for stopping the Dust Storm, but he just warned me about doing such things.”

Suzy questioned, “How did you stop it?”

Kathy replied, “I don’t know. I just did it.”

Suzy smiled and pushed Love into Kathy as Jim and Albert came back. Then Suzy threw a ball of bright flashing colored light in the air, and shot it with a lightning bolt. Thousands of little flashing stars rained down on them as Jim blinked them home.
 
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