Comments for A Dogs Tale

surfingdemon

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A part biographical/part fiction about how our current dog came to live with and be a part of our family. It’s the first fictional writing that I’ve attempted in nearly 25 years, so constructive comments which would help me improve my writing would be appreciated.
 

surfingdemon

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We have been the endlessly entertained owners of Daisy for 2 ½ months now. She did have to be shaved nearly bald the next day and became the proud owner of a red dog coat. She’s currently looking very fluffy and butterball like.

She had serious house training problems at first, to the extent of regularly dirtying her own bed. We booked her into a local Dog Training, Behavior and Complementary Therapy Centre for some stress therapy and a behaviour modification program for her toileting problems. Fingers crossed, these problems seem to have resolved themselves in the last two weeks so she wouldn’t seem to need the behaviour program anymore. We’ll still be taking her for the stress therapy though as she would enjoy it. I’m going to learn doggie massage!

Despite her obviously rocky start Daisy is a very gentle and loving animal who likes nothing better than to cuddle. When she is more settled in about six months time we are hoping that she is accepted on a dog visiting program in nursing homes and hospitals, as a therapy dog. There might be another story there when that happens...
 
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surfingdemon

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Nicely done. I loved the description of the dogs' former human.....

It needs working on but, thank you for your encouraging comments
 

surfingdemon

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Uhm... it's sis but that's ok bro you weren't to know :)

The demands of life have curtailed my time for writing at the moment but, thank you for the compliment of wanting to read more. I won't be able to write for the next couple of months but I am jotting down ideas to exapand the story in spare minutes that I have.

One quick update, the dog behaviourist thought we had done a wonderful job with Daisy, to the extent that she didn't need stress therapy. She decided to work with us on some training towards Daisy becoming a therapy dog instead.
 

surfingdemon

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LOL! :)

That's part of the fun of the wonderful worldwide web, no-one knows who you really are......(cue spooky music).
 
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