First, let me say that I find the stories to be very good.
My only gripe is when an author gets bogged down in inconsequential details:
"He took his .34567 Super-Dooper pistol with its gold-plated handle, 300x Wilson sniper-scope, and Hush-Boy Rad-15 silencer, and got into his 1892 Chevy Camaro with 7700cu. in. V-15 Boxer engine, auto/manual transmission, and purple-striped headlights..."
It's no doubt interesting to those who are interested in such things (plainly, I am not one! ), but otherwise something like "He took his pistol and got into his car" will do just as well.
Finally, let me say that I find the stories to be very good.
Thanks to all of the authors,
--Rich
My only gripe is when an author gets bogged down in inconsequential details:
"He took his .34567 Super-Dooper pistol with its gold-plated handle, 300x Wilson sniper-scope, and Hush-Boy Rad-15 silencer, and got into his 1892 Chevy Camaro with 7700cu. in. V-15 Boxer engine, auto/manual transmission, and purple-striped headlights..."
It's no doubt interesting to those who are interested in such things (plainly, I am not one! ), but otherwise something like "He took his pistol and got into his car" will do just as well.
Finally, let me say that I find the stories to be very good.
Thanks to all of the authors,
--Rich