Comments for Downgrade

[Infoscout]

Y'all know the drill, please place comments here, and have a some sweet tea!
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[seraphima]

Thank you for starting a new story scenario- I always learn a lot from these!

 

[jazzy]

looken' good---cant wait for the rest!

 

[Jenncw]

New story

YEAH!!!!!!!! A New STORY! I'm looking forward to reading it very much!

 

[murgatroid_98]

Looks like a good start

 

[mbabulldog]

I like the tie-in to real-world events...

keep it coming, and soon!!!
Bulldog

 

[Deena in GA]

Great start! Hope you can quickly add some more to the story.

 

[KDOG's Domain]

Good to go!

Excellent start - I look forward to more!

 

[Infoscout]

new story up!

 

[gardenlily]

You have my attention!!! Waiting for more!

 

[Christian for Israel]

keep it going bro, it's great so far!

 

[Brutus]

C'mon Scout... You're teasing us too much.



Good stuff thus far. Keep it up.

 

[Infoscout]

new one up! hope y'all enjoy!

 

[ofuzzy1]

Absolutely riveting!

Thanks!

Editorial comments:
1. PLEAZE ADD MORE WHITE SPACE.

This means more returns, It makes it so much easier to read. My eyes are not old, and nor do they wish to be from reading tighly packed text.
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Delvin, I'm thinking did you goof on the name, nope he's talking about a new character.

2. Make the transition to other characters/situations easy to realize.
a. Use extra white space 2-3 returns to show new subject.
b. Use a intro ...

e.g.
John was worried about his wifey being po'd ...
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Delvin, I'm thinking did you goof on the name, nope he's talking about a new character.


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I'd use both to be sure Fuzzy minded folks get it

 

[Jenncw]

Thrilled

I'm thrilled to see another new story here! The story has my interest. I hope to see MANY new chapters soon!

 

[Infoscout]

ofuzzy,



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Devlin!





Thanks




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the story.

 

[Deena in GA]

I'm anxiously awaiting another chapter. Good work!

 

[ofuzzy1]

Thanks


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Scout

 

[Ting]

Great so far. Please keep it coming.

 

[BUBBAHOTEPT]

I am really enjoying your story. I have been thinking along the lines of an, " I get it scenario, and how much time do I have before people panic to get all available preps, cash, use CCs, etc ".......................I saw what you asked about on the main board and it is exactly where my mind is headed; example, NY nuked, your scenario, etc.........

Like you, I believe there will be an important window of opportunity before the DGIs wake up and basically go psycho. That window will be very important to exploit!!!.............Keep it coming............

 

[cooter]

dang,,,,,,,,,,,

first it was deep winter,,,,,keeping track of that story,,,,,,,,,,,

now I got 2 storys to keep up with now,,,,,


this is starting gooooood,,,,,,fals,,,,browning hipowers,,dirty nuke,,,,ect,,,,,,,think I m really liking this,,,,,,


now Im hooked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wheres the next chapter,,,,

 

[Infoscout]

cooter,

Try Urban Domino too. That is one of mine that only has one chapter left. It is such a doozy I had to take a break from it. But you can read that one while you wait for other chapters. Aww heck......every story here is excellent!!!!!!! I love them all. The great thing is, even if some of the scenario's are close, the stories are all different. And the authors are all awesome, except me, I am the consumate amateur.

 

[Christian for Israel]

heck cooter, try keeping up with over 30 stories at one time over on frugal's.

infoscout knows what i'm talking about...

good story bro, i hope fletch and his wife don't go causing any trouble for the others when everything goes south.

 

[cooter]

hmmmmmm thanks,,,infoscout,

Urban Domino,,,

guess I`ll go read that one too,,,,,


CFI,,,,,gave up trying to keep up over at frugals,,,,good site,,,but sometimes you gotta get your focus back,,,,,,,,

 

[Infoscout]

We are truly blessed that we have two wonderful sites with this kind of fiction, and you don't have to pay for it to read it. And every story is different, and from a different perspective. I only wish I could afford to travel, to meet all the authors!

 

[Infoscout]

Next chapter up!

 

[Christian for Israel]

i'm sure glad fletch's uncle is on the ball! it's about to hit the fan big time!

excellent chapter bro!

 

[ofuzzy1]

Info,

Bravo! Thanks

 

[Infoscout]

Thanks guys! wait till the next one! Man Shopping, and you won't see this one on Dr. Phil or Oprah.

 

[Infoscout]

Next chapter up! Something I have always wanted to do!

 

[Christian for Israel]

good, they're armed and prepped, and i'll bet devlin will be able to help modify things as needed too.

good chapter bro, keep 'em coming.

 

[Jenncw]

Thanks

Keep the chapters coming. I'm reading lots of stories here and at Frugals. I must say I really like the way all of the story is together here, and then having another page for the comments. It makes it so much easier to keep up with the chapters.
Thanks for posting this one here too.

 

[KDOG's Domain]

Getting REALLY Good!

I'm enjoying how this story is progressing. I wish I could "man-shop" like that!

Keep up the great work, and I look forward to more!

 

[nancy98]

BTT

Just for you.

Hope you are feeling better and you can feed us soon!

 

[Christian for Israel]

praying for a quick recovery.

 

[Jenncw]

Get well soon!

Infoscout, sorry to hear that you have been ill. I hope you recover soon. I'm sorry about posting on the story page. I totally forgot about the comments thread going for the story.

 

[Infoscout]

no sweat and thanks! I promise a new chapter by mid week!

 

[Christian for Israel]

looking forward to it. how you feeling?

 

[Infoscout]

It's coming CFI, I went to the doctor on tuesday, and I have an upper respiratory infection.
my voice is now a cross between Barry white and Froggy from the little rascals. I feel pretty good, just a little weak. But I am working on the chapter and hope to have it out this afternoon or late tonight.

I appreciate your patience!

 

[Infoscout]

New Chapter up.......